The third person

[ender_williams]

Standing completely alone in a busy public place has become my favorite activity. Sitting inside the chamber of my own mind...where everyone lives their life whether they admit to it or not...and just taking in the one thing you can't learn in books, human nature. The way she walks with a smile on her face but is dying, if not completely dead on

Comments

people....

[ppod]

the way you view people and the world can change the way you view yourself and how you feel. i read, that really "seeing" people is different from looking at them. i always find...more so lately...that i constantly underestimate other people. they usually have more to offer than i give them credit for. sometimes they don't

Birthday Girls

[kellyflogue]

i just talked to your online...

But I just wanted to say how much I admirer your writing.
100% honesty. I wish I had what you had. Like, straight up writing. I wish that I could write like you. Seriously.

I want you to write a song for me, the words that is...that would be amazing.

Not that you have to, but that would be amazing for me.

Keep it up, bra.

Re: Birthday Girls

[wu___]

just another admirer dropping by to say good job.

-wu

Re: Birthday Girls

[ender_williams]

oh man...that would be amazing for me...i dont know if i could write songs...defintely not as well as you do...thank you for the compliment...but believe me...i wish i could sing/play guitar like you too, and you can write. you have so many people that like...admire you...i get maybe ten people who read this...you're doing something with your dreams...congratulations...

Re: Birthday Girls

[kellyflogue]

i admire the modesty. but teddy...don't kid yourself. You pretty much eat talent for breakfast. keep it up.

[anonymous]

teddy its jim casey, im not one to read long journal entrys like i start but then im like screw it and dont finish, but i was reading a few of yours and its like u cant stop reading them. very good writting. well i just thought id let u know that i think ur writings very good, not like u havent herd it before cause like every comment u have is like worshiping u for ur writting, which they should be its very good, i tried writing a book one time it really sucked i got like 2 chapters into it and i gave up cause i dont know it wasnt like ur writing u just have a way with words that grabs on. well cya later, sorry i dont no if i was suppose to see ur journal entrys i just saw ur name on brittanys and decided to check it out

[ender_williams]

Jim, good to hear from you...it's fine that you're reading it, dont worry. thank you very much for what you said like seriously...sometimes i wonder if my stuff is actually good to read, so thanks. haha...writing books is definetely not easy haha...it takes me forever to write long things so dont worry about it...

laughing out loud

[wu___]

jim your comment was hilarious. funny kid. what was your book about?

Re: laughing out loud

[anonymous]

hey it was really random i was goin to make it about my highschool life and then i got through a part about goin to nantucket and through the football season then i read it to myself and i was just thinking god nobody would want to read this

[victoria_lee]

so he tested time, it's time that he thought she'd need. its his selfish mind that gives him this empty life, he now screams...he says, "i can't please myself. and its you, you're all i want."

teddy.
you are someone to be admired.
for always.

[beneath_surface]

Every single time I read your new entries I forget about everything happening around me. You create an amazing picture through your words. As usual, I am in aww of this post.

[beneath_surface]

haha, meaning 'awe'