New Draft 5/29/10

May 31, 2010 20:38

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prosewitch June 1 2010, 03:45:00 UTC
I like the rhythm, and I smiled a bit when I reached the end of the poem.

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ennia June 3 2010, 00:24:15 UTC
Thank you. I hope to revise it a little bit sometime soon.

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juvenile_philos June 1 2010, 13:50:02 UTC
Cute!

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ennia June 3 2010, 00:24:28 UTC
Thanks.

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miischelle June 1 2010, 16:37:00 UTC
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ennia June 3 2010, 00:24:37 UTC
I'm glad you like it.

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