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shinnyluvssuju July 18 2012, 05:10:31 UTC
This was so amazing, and so well written. I love your metaphors and your vocabulary and all your literary techniques.

Seriously, this was like, a masterpiece.

I loved it.

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envybleedsgreen July 18 2012, 18:13:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I can't believe I'm receiving a comment like this. It's not a masterpiece though. I actually think this is one of my... not the best stories. LOL.

Thank you though! <3

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enen_chan July 18 2012, 19:37:18 UTC
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wow. this was amazingly written~ and a nice take on the prompt~ we never would think of kyungsoo as the one to initiate escape... but this makes so much sense~~ and your writing is beautiful~ ^^

and a thank you for reading and commenting on all my exo fics~ ^^ they made me very happy! ^^

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envybleedsgreen July 18 2012, 21:07:56 UTC
It's not really that ;;;;;; Thank you for the compliment though! T_T

You're welcome! :D I love your writing. <333

Let's be friends. ^^

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enen_chan July 18 2012, 23:14:45 UTC
omg. /flails you love my writing?! thank you so much~~~ i'm gonna go read your other fics, because i loved your writing in this one~~

sure thing~~ let us be friends who love each other's writing... heehee~~ :P

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envybleedsgreen July 19 2012, 02:28:21 UTC
LOL. Have fun with that? :D

I'm Emily, nice to meet you! ^^

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owlus July 19 2012, 02:45:07 UTC
Hello, your fic has been accepted by aideshou! Please don't forget about voting starting today!

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read0write July 19 2012, 03:49:50 UTC
aww how could they leave just like that? O_O please tell me they'll find each other in some years and get back together :( i'm not one for unhappy endings...
it's good they need to be themselves again after seemingly losing themselves in the relationship but i do hope they get back together :(
aww...
but don't write a sequel if you don't wish to XD

it was good though ^^

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envybleedsgreen July 19 2012, 04:12:29 UTC
Actually, this was going to be two parts. The part with Kai taking the scholarship was actually going to be the beginning of part two, but then my beta told me to end it off as it was. ;-;

I want a sequel too. /sobs.

Thank you!

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read0write July 19 2012, 04:42:13 UTC
aww...would've liked the two parts
please have a sequel though ^^
really wanna see their happy ending :D

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envybleedsgreen July 19 2012, 04:44:04 UTC
Maybe next time. I don't know, we'll see! :3

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thisismylastlie July 19 2012, 06:47:06 UTC
oh my gosh.
I love this.
I can't - why would - what happens.
what. happens.
please tell me there's more D:

the ending is good, not gonna lie, but it's also so empty and saddening. THERE'S NO CLOSURE.

ugh your story is one of those stories where I want a sequel. and I don't even like sequels OTL

anyway, I like this a lot, a lot, a lot.

... I'd like it more if you wrote moar.

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envybleedsgreen July 19 2012, 18:00:48 UTC
Originally, there was going to be a sequel, but my beta cut me off. LOL. We'll see though!

I'm honoured to make you want something you don't like? LOL.

Thank you for reading! ^^

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thisismylastlie July 19 2012, 20:01:15 UTC
lol rebel against your beta. /slapped.
or beg.
I'll beg for you? xD

/needs closure.

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