I'm really bad at thinking up titles for stories and fics and poems and well, everything

[ephemery]

For zweikirschen

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Series: Gundam 00
Characters: Setsuna, Allelujah, Lockon (Neil), Tieria
Pairing: Setsuna/Allelujah
Rating: PG
Prompt:"I think your flaw isn't so much your fault as a charm."
Summary:Comfort in intervals of two years.
Author's Note: The answer to your question about my thoughts on this pairing are well, "I haven't thought about it before". So

Comments

[vainilla]

This is...awesome. I loved it. Really... *reads it again and again and again*

[ephemery]

Aw...thank you so much! Setsuna and Allelujah didn't have that much interaction in S1 so I ended up making...well, most of it up xD Glad it worked!

[carameltrap]

This is really good. I really love the little nuances of their relationship you wrote in there. Mem this for future read.

[ephemery]

Oh, thanks! I'm glad that I was able to work in nuances for their relationship. I suppose I wanted to show that it didn't or couldn't exist in isolation.

[mangaka_chan]

Nice. :D I like meister bonding fics would think of something more intelligent to say but is too brain dead from studying

[ephemery]

Thank you for reading! And it's okay. Studying is the death of brain cells

[zweikirschen]

♥♥
Coherency fails me and I'm reminded again why I love this pairing. Allelujah's internalising, the thin line between him and Hallelujah... I really liked the way you described it as disorienting and nauseating.

And Setsuna is adorable of course X3 This line: There will be marks on both of them later - a lattice of thin lines on Setsuna's neck from Allelujah's hair, the imprint of Setsuna's fingers on Allelujah's arm. But for now, they sink further into each other. I can see it so clearly in my mind and it's beautiful.

Thank you for writing this even though you hadn't thought about the pairing before XD

[ephemery]

Eee...I'm glad you liked it! It was actually really interesting to write, as it made me think about how Allelujah/Setsuna would work. I think I see it as consisting mostly of snatched instances, with the real development happening during the four/five year intermission. The scene where Allelujah's leaning on Setsuna is one of my favourite too. I think I thought of it soon after you made your request, and the rest of the fic filled in and developed as I was writing it.

It's gotten me all interested in Hallelujah and Allelujah now - they've generally been depicted as quite distinct, but how distinct is it, really? And what are the side or the lasting effects of constantly having your body and mind taken over by another persona? o:

[karinablue_rose]

This is very poetic.I really enjoyed reading it.

[ephemery]

Oh, thank you. I should try to write in different, varied styles, but this sort of prose just seems to work for me.