WOS: Oh, dear

[jane_elliot]

"This is my take on Harry and Snape having to marrage each other. Yes I know the idea has been done before but this is my take on it. It is slash so if you don't like then don't read. That simple. complete"

I think this one speaks for itself.

Comments

[gwendolynflight]

Wow, I'm liking 'marrage' (marriage, I'm guessing?) as a verb, there. ::headdesk::

[jane_elliot]

I swear, every time I see "marrage", I hear "mawwage" in my head. And now I have to go watch The Princess Bride again, dammit!

[terrie01]

"Mawwage is what bwings us together today."

[gwendolynflight]

Ooh, have you seen it on Blu ray? It's gorgeous. The fabrics!

[anikiro]

I was curious so i read the first thankfully short chapter. My favorite was: "If one can not find a partner then the ministry will help in founding one for them"

[jane_elliot]

Ouch! Though, I have to admit, I'm now seriously leaning towards the writing not speaking English as a first language. Verb tense is one of those things that native speakers intuitively understand (from absorbing it as babies) that non-native speakers easily screw up (I speak from painful experience -- there's a reason why I don't speak Spanish or German or French today:)

[mysticdreamer32]

And yeah I corrected her spelling I couldn't help it, it annoyed me too much to leave it alone.

Eta: edited comment

[jane_elliot]

Just as a head's up, I did delete your initial comment (these Wall of Shame posts have to be anonymous, or I can't post them.) Still, I do feel your pain!

[mysticdreamer32]

I figured you'd have to screen it at least, but that's okay I understand. :)