I was riffing a poem in my head last night. I forgot it.

The appropriate response to hurtful crit of my short story seems to be more hurtful crit of the story. Put that one down for awhile and start a new one with the things I've learned.

i can't decide which to do.

so i keep wasting time on the intarweb.

If you want to read the stuff I write, friend request me!