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erinrua

Command me fics #4 and #5 - PoTC

Jul 26, 2008 12:55

Ahoy, mates! Here I am at long last with a couple more installments for my command me self-challenge!

First is an overfed POTC drabble for geekmama's prompt: "PIRATES!!!! Please??" I hope this pleases you, luv! Thanks for giving my muses a poke. :-D
Title: A Matter of Semantics
Author: ErinRua
Rating: PG
Length: @ 305 words
Characters: Jack Sparrow, ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

kayden_eidyak July 26 2008, 21:41:31 UTC

*giggles hysterically* Oh my...that first one was...*splutters* Really, I can't even think what to say for laughing. But that was genius! I can SO see Jack getting himself in a pickle like that and trying to charm his way out to no avail. Brilliant!

And the second one was quite lovely. Very soft - like a whispers. Very nice!

And of course I'm so happy to see "Pirate" based words coming from your dear talented little fingers once more...even if it is for a brief time. :)

erinrua July 31 2008, 01:20:54 UTC

Hee! Thank you, sweetie! *hugs* I'm glad you liked this. I had fun playing with PoTC, even if briefly. But I *do* have at least a couple more prompts on tap, so there will be more. Eventually. ;-) Thanks for reading and commenting! *smish*

torn_eledhwen July 26 2008, 23:15:53 UTC

They're both wonderful! :) (Says Eledhwen, resurfacing briefly from Doctor Who).

erinrua July 31 2008, 01:21:37 UTC

Well, you're in fine company over in Dr Who land, it would seem. *hugs* Thanks for reading and commenting!

mary684 July 27 2008, 00:01:10 UTC

Oh my. I just stopped at 'quiet as God' and spent a few minutes just admiring that phrase. Wow -- just perfectly used in this setting. Then, I went back and re-read the whole thing a few times, cuz it was just so gorgeous. Jack and him Pearl - lovely stuff.

The first was a riot. With these, you've captured two of the many sides of Jack Sparrow.

erinrua July 31 2008, 01:22:15 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! I love hearing what you enjoyed about these two ficlets. Thanks, mate! :-)

sharklady35 July 27 2008, 01:04:22 UTC

A bit of farce and a sublime moment- nice variety pack!

erinrua July 31 2008, 01:23:06 UTC

A variety pack o' Jack - LOL! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :-)

arliss July 27 2008, 07:10:18 UTC

Gorgeous, each, in its own way. Lovely.

erinrua July 31 2008, 01:23:52 UTC

Thanks, arliss! And oh, I love your icon. Beautiful. *admires* :-)