Command me fic #9 - POTC - Keep Me For Thee

[erinrua]

I have not forgotten my promises, or you, my flisties and friends. ;-)

Title: Keep Me For Thee
Author: ErinRua
Rating: PG
Length: @ 200
Characters: Will Turner
Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: Who holds the dark captain's heart, when he is far at sea?
A double drabble written for kahva who requested," I'm joining in the call for POTC fic, and I'd love to

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

I liked this little snippet-- and probably missed some important plot developments in not having seen the third movie.

when she, warrior-bright and tiger fierce, said 'yes' to the anxious question of his soul.
I like THAT phrasing very much, beginning to end. :)

[erinrua]

Thank you so much! LOL, especially since you didn't see the 3d movie. I could tell you what happened, if you want, but anyhow, I'm happy you enjoyed! Thanks so much! :-)

[kahva]

YES!!! Thank you very much for this, wahoooooo!!!! :) :) :) I do love your writing so very much, and I miss seeing it in the POTC world. Excellent, well done, bravo! :) Your Will is excellent. :)

(Btw, would this be a good time to tell you that Thundera Tiger and I have essentially decided that you would be a excellent candidate to write a LOTR/Supernatural crossover? :) )

[erinrua]

YAYYYYYYYYYYY, you liked! :-D Thank you so much for reading! I is a happy hobbit pirate to have pleased you. *SMISH!* I'm sorry I don't write more PoTC: I guess those muses have gone ashore, but I enjoyed doing this and the other little piece. It's nice to know I can still do it! *g

[geekmama]

Beautifully written, as always. You have such a feel for writing Will.

[erinrua]

Thank you, Captain! *salutes - hugs* I'm sorry I don't write more PoTC, which makes it even sweeter when I do and it pleases people. Thanks so much! I do have a soft spot for Will, still. :-)

[kayden_eidyak]

Daaaammmnnn...

And he felt the icy-hot, grinding slide of Davy Jones' sword twixt his ribs, and the despair of all his life closed a frigid hand tightly within his chest.

It makes you shudder and flinch to read this. Awesome. Totally awesome.

[erinrua]

EEEEEEEEE, yay! Shuddering and flinching is good! Well ... you know. *g* So glad you enjoyed my little fic! :-)

[merithehobbit]

Guh! Like poetry my friend...poetry! Beautiful. :D

Loved all of it but eergh: until even the furious tenderness of her eyes faded in his dimming sight. Just Guh! Thank you for painting.

[erinrua]

Awww, thanks, sweet hobbit lass! *hugs* I'm glad I can still paint pretty words for you. :-)

mm, and look, Orli! :-D