Supernatural fic: Honorable Enterprise (PG-13)

[erisinia]

(Ohmigosh y'all, I've never cross-posted before. Is this what it's like to write in a big fandom? Weird....)

Title: Honorable Enterprise
Author: erisinia 
Rating: PG-13 (for 'Hell is a nasty place' and 'Dean is a potty mouth and a bad influence')
Genre and/or Pairing: gen, au
Spoilers: let's go with seasons 4 & 5.
Warnings: Language, blood'n'gore, fallen-ish

Comments

[mulder200]

"Cover your eyes," he says grimly; Sam obeys because it's an angel, Dean because it's Castiel, and Bobby because he's not stupid.

LOL!

"Cas?"

Castiel blinks, and shakes himself, and pulls his arm through the sleeve. "I apologize, Dean, but I appear to have fucked up my stitches."

"Dean!" Sam yelps. "You taught the angel how to swear?!" He has more to say, a shrilly building rant that has little to do with the swearing and a lot to do with long-festering worry, as Castiel tries to explain the moral difference between taking the Lord's name in vain and invective involving copulation or excrement, and Bobby calls them all idiots and breaks into the liquor cabinet.

LMAO! If Sam thinks Cas cursing is bad, I can just imagine his response to Dean taking Cas to a brothel!

[erisinia]

His giant head would EXPLODE. ;)

Thanks for replying! I appreciate you pointing out lines that you liked. :)

[tahirire]

You've been a fan for TWO WEEKS??? ♥_&Hearts;

WELCOME!! :D :D :D

"Cover your eyes," he says grimly; Sam obeys because it's an angel, Dean because it's Castiel, and Bobby because he's not stupid. - Loll, best line ever.

I love Cas owning Uriel like that. It would have been great if he'd have been able to pull Dean out early. I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you!

[erisinia]

Eh, maybe three. There was school in there so it wasn't uninterrupted. ;) Thank you for the welcome!

Cas is a BAMF. And I really wanted poor Dean to catch a break. *hugs him* Thanks for reviewing. ♥

[elfinmouse]

This is wonderful! I love this idea and I'm very curious to find out what you're going to do next with it.

[erisinia]

Thank you very much! It's an interesting concept...I have notes on what could happen next, so we'll see if it turns into a story. :)

[scarecrowqueen]

This is incredible, I love every second of this "how things could have been" glimpse. More please? like, never stop writing fic ever, because that's the only way I'll be satisfied?

[erisinia]

Wow, thanks so much for your enthusiastic response!

I hope to write more; this is about the longest fic I've ever written, so we'll see how it goes, heh.

[miscellanium]

(wait, two weeks? you're shitting me, i was thinking you were a month in!)

You already know how much I love this premise, and the more I read this the more perfect your Bobby voice seems and I want to hug your Cas forever and so many of your little descriptions are just excellent and and and. <33333

[erisinia]

Two or three, yup. :)

Thanks so much for pointing out the parts that worked. *hugs* It works at all because of yoooooouuuuu. *sends internet flowers and chocolates*