eru your views on annie/mitchell are scarily similar to mine...
in fact your whole vision of the bh world is like mine... so weird you called vampirism a 'parasite' because that was my scientific explanation for it..
plus i used the phrase 'yin and yang' for annie and mitchell! plus the light and dark contrasts...
plus there's a lot of stuff in your fic that echoes things i had planned for my own stories.
anyway. this was excellent. will look forward to reading more.. and seeing you again on the forum..
I just read this fic from start to finish, and I absolutely LOVED it. Since this is a new fandom, there's not much in the way of fic, so imagine how pleased I was to stumble upon this gem. I'll definitely be looking out for any more fic you decide to post.
Great ending. The fight scene was both believable and thrilling, and the feeling of a sort of resolution and calm -if only for now- at the ending left me feeling pleased.
Also, your Annie/Mitchell is absolute love! You convey them in sweetness that doesn't take Mitchell's bite away and gives Annie strength; your characterization in general is spot on.
Thankyou so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I guess it was my little challenge to myself to show that Annie/Mitchell wasn't dull by default, and that actually, it could work to bring out some really interesting conflicts.
I'm actually trying to carry on with a second 'episode' in this AU, and your comments have been really helpful in encouraging me to get on with that. Merci!
I just got done reading your story and I could not stop for a second. You really captured the characters and wrote them wonderfully. Great job. I hope you decide to keep on writing some wonderful "Being Human" stories, because there are not enough out there.
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in fact your whole vision of the bh world is like mine... so weird you called vampirism a 'parasite' because that was my scientific explanation for it..
plus i used the phrase 'yin and yang' for annie and mitchell! plus the light and dark contrasts...
plus there's a lot of stuff in your fic that echoes things i had planned for my own stories.
anyway. this was excellent. will look forward to reading more.. and seeing you again on the forum..
it's bexter2001 btw.
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Also, your Annie/Mitchell is absolute love! You convey them in sweetness that doesn't take Mitchell's bite away and gives Annie strength; your characterization in general is spot on.
Overall, lovely, fantastic fic! ;)
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I'm actually trying to carry on with a second 'episode' in this AU, and your comments have been really helpful in encouraging me to get on with that. Merci!
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Take care and Happy Writing!
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