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Jul 25, 2010 23:37

Title: Green Sharpies 
Pairing: Hotch/Reid with a side of Hotch/Haley
Rating: PG-13ish? 
Summary: Hotch comes to terms with falling out of love with Haley, and falling in love with Reid. Tiny spoilers for Revelations, big spoilers for 100 
Authors Note: Don't own the characters, have noting to do with CM or CBS.  Just for fun.  Unbeated, all mistakes ( Read more... )

hotch/reid, fic

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luredin July 26 2010, 03:53:05 UTC
Awww. This was so sweet, and completely believable, too. I loved the ending:

“I love you too. Have for awhile. Since you almost got green sharpie all over your lips as you kept moving the pen side to side between your teeth.”
“That situation happens almost every case.”
“I know.”

Thanks for sharing! :)

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escapethelight July 26 2010, 04:19:34 UTC
Thanks for reading, and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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daylyn July 26 2010, 04:22:30 UTC
Seconding the 'awwwww' and the love for the ending. Very sweet (with a little bit of sadness... just perfect in a way).

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escapethelight July 28 2010, 02:25:51 UTC
=) That ending came out of nowhere in my head. Glad it worked!

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gail19 July 26 2010, 04:23:45 UTC
It flowed so naturally from section to section. Sweet.

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escapethelight July 28 2010, 02:26:12 UTC
=D Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it

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schnuffie July 26 2010, 05:22:29 UTC
Awwwwww, squeeeee!

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escapethelight July 28 2010, 02:26:24 UTC
<3

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bowie28 July 26 2010, 06:11:19 UTC
I love your writing and this one is no exception. You gave it just the right amount of pain and longing, realness and sweetnees. You turned this Monday a little brighter. Thank you. &hearts

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escapethelight July 28 2010, 02:27:13 UTC
Awww I'm glad I could make your Monday! (they always tend to suck, don't they?)

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