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[PoT]:: Inui/Eiji In a Single Bound II

Jan 22, 2012 21:57

Title: In a Single Bound II
Pairing: Inui/Eiji, Kirihara/Bunta.
Rating/Contains/Word count: R/Darker themes, kidnapping/ 3,424
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Prince of Tennis.
Summary: In which the two pairs make their move, and lose someone important.
Notes: Please let me know your thoughts/constructive crit/comments. This is ( Read more... )

c: marui bunta, s: prince of tennis, fic, c: kirihara akaya, c: inui sadaharu, c: kikumaru eiji

Comments 11

darkelfgrl January 23 2012, 06:18:38 UTC

Gah. I seriously love this series. I love how you manage to sneak in your other fave pairings despite the main one being Inui/Eiji. Omg. Poor Bunta. I can imagine how broken the boy is right now.

Again, lovely job. Can't wait for more!

*G*

espial January 23 2012, 16:46:44 UTC

Bwahaha. But you know too much. :) And I don't think I can do anything without Kirihara/Bunta slipping in there. I blame you. ;)

Thank you lovely.

feihu January 23 2012, 07:17:04 UTC

*hugs Akaya to protect him* Poor baby! I can't wait to see what happens next!

espial January 23 2012, 16:47:53 UTC

:D It will be up later this week. Thanks for reading.

perkyandproud January 23 2012, 08:11:15 UTC

Oooo! Plot! And it's thick! Mmm, juicy thick plot :-)

Poor Kirihara! I look forward to the rescue! *hugs them all*

espial January 23 2012, 16:49:02 UTC

The next part is even meatier. (lord that sounds wrong XD ) Thank you for reading. Means a lot to me.

whisper132 January 23 2012, 08:34:06 UTC

I'm really enjoying this series. It's engaging. One thing I should mention, though, is that it's "Yanagi" and not "Yagani" in terms of Renji's family name. I meant to mention it before but forgot.

Now I'll just wait quietly for Akaya's rescue, which I'm sure will be spectacular.

espial January 23 2012, 16:51:17 UTC

Arg. I always try to triple check that, but I transpose the letters. Sorry about that, it's fixed now. I'm glad you're liking the series. It's the first time I've done something like this.

petitefee24 January 23 2012, 17:54:37 UTC

Don't worry Akaya, dad Sanada's in his way to recue you!

I really really really like this AU *.* I like it so much that I don't mind that is a Bunta/Akaya Yanakiri to the bone fan here. This is like candies for a starving system-burned mind 8D yes that makes sense to me

Mmm maybe it was because of the warning at the beggining but I felt Akaya's kidnap a little bit unclimatic o.O, but Hyotei being the bad guys here makes it up big time *-*, and somehow this is mixing my idea of an au with a friend's idea of au and that's kind of creepy.... ok.

I wonder if you plan to get Yukimura in here, and if is that so how are you gonna do it. My sanning bakemono.

I love reading you at work :D