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[estuve]

title: not lost, just lonely. (part 1 of 2)
characters: steven gerrard/xabi alonso, fernando torres/sergio ramos, iker casillas, pepe reina, cesc fabregas, david villa, alvaro arbeloa, olalla dominguez, lara alvarez, jamie carragher, raul meireles, dirk kuyt.
rating: r.
disclaimer: i'm lying.
word count: 9,402.
notes: au. soo, this took me FOREVER

Comments

[everyforever]

OKAY HERE;S THE REAL COMMENT OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU'RE ACTUALLY STUPID. LIKE. THE FACT THAT YOU DIDN'T THINK THIS WAS GOOD IS LIKE PROOF TO ME THAT YOU ARE SERIOUSLY DUMB YOU ARE SO DUMB FOR REAL OMG I LOVE THIS. AND I NEED PART TWO. LIKE IMMEDIATELY. LIKE REALLY SOON.

I THINK YOU SHOULD MENTION LIZZIE & JESSICA & NAMELESS GIRL AGAIN I BET THE WORLD IS INTERESTED IN THEIR PLOT LINES

I LOVE YOU

THIS IS SO GOOD I WISH I COULD LIKE TELL YOU BETTER. HOW GOOD THIS IS. DUMMY.

[estuve]

AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAHAHA

liz and jess and nameless girl (poor nameless girl) should be the main focus...

[dld_ftw]

This? Fantastic. A new fic from you is always an event. I can't wait for the second part. Don't suppose we can convince you to extend it beyond 2 parts? ;-)

[estuve]

thank you! =) ummmhrgmklsajfl, if i COULD manage to make this more than a 2nd part, i would. i don't know what to even write for that part, hahahaha.

[foxing]

actually insulted you tried to construct a witty, endearing, and fun story about footballers being caterers, when the real story is with liz, jess, and the nameless girl. INSULTED.

jk. this is lovely! and i'm feeling for fernando like i do in real life: i want to pinch his cheek and punch him in the face at the same time. I AM SORRY I KNOW HOW YOU LOVE FERNANDO I LOVE HIM TOO but but but sergio!

this is still disturbingly happy for you. i didn't go through a tissue box... bracing myself for part 2

ahhhhhhh. ♥

[everyforever]

when the real story is with liz, jess, and the nameless girl. INSULTED.

IKR????????????????????????

[estuve]

hehehehe i love you. so much.

[darkensunrise]

Oh my GOD this is amazing. I seriously love everything you write and this is just als;kdalskd;las SO SO GOOD. I can't wait until the next part.

[estuve]

ahhhhhhh thanks =)

[copadenieve]

WOW
This is really amazing!
(Although Sergio and Fernando should've known being fuck buddies doesn't work out, it never does)...
But I'm really excited and looking forward to the next part!!
And Xabi and Stevie are sooooo cute, they just have to talk and they'll be fine.
And Fernando has to break up with Olalla, of course...
Sounds like a perfect plan for me
Please update soon

[estuve]

i will try to update soon!!!!!!!!!