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[estuve]

title: not lost, just lonely. (part 1 of 2)
characters: steven gerrard/xabi alonso, fernando torres/sergio ramos, iker casillas, pepe reina, cesc fabregas, david villa, alvaro arbeloa, olalla dominguez, lara alvarez, jamie carragher, raul meireles, dirk kuyt.
rating: r.
disclaimer: i'm lying.
word count: 9,402.
notes: au. soo, this took me FOREVER

Comments

[harderthaneasy]

this was brilliant!! loved it <3

[estuve]

thank you<3

[coldryuuza]

!!!!! Men -___-

I look forward to the next chapter :D

[estuve]

thanks for commenting!

[lullaby9]

HOW IS IT EVEN POSIBLE YOU MAKE ME CRY IN EVERY FIC

[estuve]

hahahahaha YES I WILL TELL HER

also lmao thanks for this comment, this is awesome. alkdsjfljka.

[theosakansun]

You have no idea how much I love your AUs. I think I've got most of them bookmarked, and I rarely bookmark fic so that's how good they are.

I'm going to make a list of things which make your fic more outstanding than most.
1) Your characters. They're all perfect. They're not dream people, they fuck up and make mistakes. But they're so real. After reading just this chapter, it feels like I ~know~ your characters, like they're people I use to hang out with. And all of them are different from each other. And they've all got a personality of their own!

2) The plot. Honestly your AUs are flawless and so unique.

3) The subtle hurt/not everything turns out as expected. Like it seems to easy to begin with, like Sergio and Fernando sleeping together. Then, after a while, it turns out it's in fact not that easy at all.

[estuve]

ah wow, this is one of the best comments i've ever gotten! thanks so much.

[estuve]

i'll try to update soon!!! thanks so much for reading.