Comments | eternal_ot: Passion v/s Money

eternal_ot

Passion v/s Money

May 18, 2017 21:36

Always read the Story before the review ( Read more... )

therealljidol, week 18, intersection week, the distance between us.

Comments 32

beeker121 May 20 2017, 20:31:01 UTC

Poor passion just wants to be noticed by money but nothing doing. This is fun.

eternal_ot May 21 2017, 07:11:14 UTC

Hehe.. I thought of writing a thinkpost and then it was turning out to be way serious. Glad to know you enjoyed it :) Thanks a ton for stopping by <3

halfshellvenus May 21 2017, 07:31:33 UTC

I liked the review of the partner story (and yes, the layer of communication between husband and wife as a sidebar to the parents' discussion with child).

And then the letter of passion to money, with all of the internet app puns... :D

Why DOES money so rarely seem to swipe right on passion? How stuck up and self-important is that? Poor passion, pining away for more attention...

eternal_ot May 22 2017, 06:31:01 UTC

I found that part hilarious and could actually visualize a sitcom playing in my head :D

Yay! Glad you found it amusing . I thought of doing a think-post, but then it was turning out to be way more serious , so things took a turn :)

Exactly my point! :D Thanks a ton for stopping by and sharing your thought <3

bleodswean May 21 2017, 15:00:27 UTC

OHHHH!!! What a clever, clever idea and so well done!! I really liked your "review" and enjoyed seeing our thoughts match in regards to "the story". I loved how you finished with the letter, it made your review even that much more powerful a statement. It's not easy to "review" short, experimental work but I would say you're a gifted flash fiction reviewer!

eternal_ot May 22 2017, 06:34:42 UTC

Wow! You really make me feel good :) Finding non-fiction stories is not an easy task esp when you have a boring life ; and it was fun doing this experiment. I am really glad that you liked it and our thoughts matched .

Thanks a ton for a lovely compliment. I'll definitely cherish these words :) *Hugs* Happy to see you here <3

shadowwolf13 May 22 2017, 01:36:34 UTC

Such a fun idea!

eternal_ot May 22 2017, 06:35:15 UTC

Thank you :) Happy to know it worked for you <3 Good to see you stop by.

favoritebean May 22 2017, 07:51:26 UTC

I did not expect two pieces for the price of one. I loved your review. That is definitely something we don't see on Idol too often. How cool!

eternal_ot May 22 2017, 15:15:46 UTC

Thank you kindly :) I am happy to know it worked for you. Good to see you stop by <3