[FIC] Don’t Look Back [5/5]

[eternally_4ever]

Title: [FIC] Don't Look Back
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: angst,slight romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Vivid description of serious illness and character death

Summary: Yunho finds a boy wandering around the streets. When he talks, he doesn't make any sense at all. Yunho later discovers that the boy is mentally retarded. Without thinking

Comments

[yunjae_16]

nohhh!!!why??? is that
for real? is he really dead?

can u just make it a
happy ending? i'm giving u
lots of love.....hihihi

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nah, i was just kidding. you can end it the way you want. ^_*

[eternally_4ever]

wow, so many pretty hearts!! ^^
yes, it is for real (don't mean to sound heartless)xD

It might not end the way people want it too, but I can't change the outcome. then the story wouldn't go with the title at all :)

but I might add a little something special in the epilogue (not sure yet)^__^

[catzchii]

I knew that Jae's gonna die..but, I never thought that he'll die by accident.. oh, gosh...so tragic... can't wai to read the epilogue..

[eternally_4ever]

The epilogue will be up soon :)

[reikonan]

omo! you really killed jae. *cries in the corner* bad red balloon!!!

[eternally_4ever]

Yup, Jae really died T_T

[kattan69]

Poor Jae! Just when life is getting better for him...you have to kill him. Life is so unfair...*sniff..sniff...*....for Jae's case.

[eternally_4ever]

I'll admit killing Jae was a little harsh, but the story needed to be just a bit more angsty (I've been depressed recently)

His life was really hard T_T

[locofruitcake]

NNOOOOOOOO!!! /wails
JAE DIED??
LIKE REALLY??? TT________________TT

[eternally_4ever]

Really really T_T