[FIC] Don’t Look Back [5/5]

[eternally_4ever]

Title: [FIC] Don't Look Back
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: angst,slight romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Vivid description of serious illness and character death

Summary: Yunho finds a boy wandering around the streets. When he talks, he doesn't make any sense at all. Yunho later discovers that the boy is mentally retarded. Without thinking

Comments

[criztalinz]

one second, happy!adorable!Jae... next thing i knew, dead!Jae??!! o.O.. Oh~ my poor heart TT-TT..

[eternally_4ever]

sorry that I hurt your heart :)

[eternally_4ever]

I always love your comments because you seem to grasp the meaning of the fic!!! ♥♥

I'm glad you liked this chapter! I thought I under-did it a little though, but you convinced me otherwise xD

I'll post the last chapter soon ^^

[pawshingo]

I knew there will be a character death but still.... *sobs* Poor Yunho, he sounded so lost after Jae drew his last breath! Damn that red balloon!

[eternally_4ever]

Yunho had loved him w/ all his heart :)
but what will become of him after Jae's gone?

[sassychicks]

NOOOOOOOOOO ~~~

I know ....there will be a "character death" but I'm still sad...
TT__TT *sob*

[eternally_4ever]

me too T__T

[gomentilltheend]

...
speechless.
So good though. I hope Yunho dies too.
**shield myself from fans**
At least Jae was happy for a while.

Jaejoong: you're messed up, u want ppl to die?!
**glares at me**
Me: yup. It's sad but good.

[eternally_4ever]

I'm glad you liked the chapter xD
Hm, I think killing Yunho might be a little too much (not to mention ppl even wanted Jae to live)^^

lol at your conversation :) so cute ~~