[Katekyou Hitman Reborn!]: "The Raven" (Hibari/Chrome + Mukuro...sort of; as requested by Rune)

[kill_me_faster]

Well, to be fair, I'm generally not one to take requests, so. But but BUT, since runesque's art is just so gorgeous, I couldn't resist pestering her to do something for me. ^___^;; *shameless WHORE* Which, uh, sorry for pestering, Rune. D: I'm not sorry about the whore part, though, so don't you dare try and make me take it back. >F

Comments

[runesque]

fASfdgwgafgagagwwgweg YOUR HIBARIIIIII <33333. I can't tell you if anyone's OOC yet since I'm guiltily enjoying what I see XDDD but I have to tell you that I'm glad you took Ruka's suggestion about independent-dependent Chrome since we'd have no story if she stayed just a doormat. And Hibari (oh *loves*) just the way I've always imagined him - no-nonsense, impulsive, deadly in his prim-and-properness (?), doesn't spare a girl (yay!) and..... picturesque (?????). Now all I need in life is Hibari sputtering incoherent Italiano XDDD.

Kusakabe is a right amusing thing as Kyou's chauffeur/butler. Will certainly make sure he gets a fair share of screentime in my Hibari Household thing <3.

Just one thing (don't smite me!)... I think in canon the Kokuyou trio only broke into Vendice once, and that is within the five years before the start of the TYL arc. But it's okay!

You know what? Don't feel forced to make it pairingy (which is too late now since hahahahaah you POSTED). I'm enjoying where this is going, like, really. WRITE MOAR.

[kill_me_faster]

I think in canon the Kokuyou trio only broke into Vendice once, and that is within the five years before the start of the TYL arc. But it's okay

Did I say more than once? XD;; orz. I was actually aware of that fact, but APPARENTLY WHAT I MEAN TO SAY AND WHAT ACTUALLY GETS TYPED ON THE COMPUTER ARE TWO COMPLETELY DIFFERENT THINGS, LOL. *face/desk*

[runesque]

Wellll, NO. But you did say they broke in ten years ago, which, no XD. I believe it's five years ago but I need to re-check with the manga.

Oh, and Realms joygasmed on your opening <33333. It's fitting, no?

[kill_me_faster]

BAHAHAHA, in which case I'll make an edit or something declaring my inability to follow canon. I was actually thinking this last night - despite the relatively small amount of chapters compared to a shounen manga, the KHR canon is...surprisingly difficult to keep track of. OR MAYBE I'M JUST RETARDED, IUNNO.

[kujasangela]

WHAT?!

[kill_me_faster]

WHAT DO YOU MEAN, "WHAT?!"?! THIS POST WASN'T EVEN FOR YOU.

[rukawagf]

I'd totally sell my soul for some more of her art...wait, did I say that out loud? *gulp* (XD)
I'm with you on that one.

oh man .... i still need to go back and read how you dorked out about reborn... but here i am reading your fic instead. T.T forgive me. I love gokudera a LOT though so...

But the words "Hibari" and "dialogue" were enough to make me cringe, ahahaha
oh gawd i totally agree

though your dialogues are made of win *.*

I'm never doing this again. *faceplant*
You always say this each fic you write XD

fangirl post even before the fic started? Only for you demi-chan~

[rukawagf]

The world spins in a wheel, and his existence spins with it. .... ironically, one thousand. A mille fiore.
*.*

already this fic is beyond my comprehension. i can never write mukuro this well.

Last time.

Laughing wildly, he spreads his arms upward, turns his face towards the sun, and walks into the sky.
jkhafdkjshafdkjsadf oh gawd T.T pls write more fics. can you believe i'm fangirling from just your introductory paragraph?

....

jkhsadfjkhaskjfh <- just contd to fangirl

If you blinked for long enough, she'd disappear.
what a beautiful way to describe her o.o

by the very powerful, and the often very desperate.
interesting way to describe her.

She put all of her power into the call, and all of her heart into hearing the answer.

OOOOOh this is tyl arc!

Bianchi, defender of all things amore,
you described her PERFECTLY!!!!!!! then again, as a gokudera fan, it's expected one must research his sister ;P

Chrome Dokuro was the single human being alive who could stomach, and even have an appetite for, Bianchi's infamous

[rukawagf]

"I'm going to look for her myself," she asserted, vengefully, clearly implying that whomever was responsible for the girl's disappearance had better be prepared to seek assistance from heaven in dealing with her wrath
You know, I LOVE bianchi and not many ppl write about her.

you write her beautifully *.*

.....When he died, he died annoyed at the noise of it all, and the claustrophobia.
the entire paragraph, i was like jaksdfsakjfhskjfhdskjfhs seriously, i should never ever write hibari ever. pls write more T.T

He took a second to enjoy the looks of stunned horror on their faces as the Hibari Kyouya in front of them burst with a cloud of smoke into a thousand twittering birds, before he spared them the trouble of worrying about the hows and the whys of it all by biting them all quite thoroughly to death.

I'm gonna be in serious trouble if i'm gonna quote your ENTIRE FIC coz i love it !!

[rukawagf]

"That was amazingly vivid," "That illusion of my death."
asdkfsldkfjslkf - i think i lost my mind by now how i just realized it was combo play!

Until I'm standing before you, bowing almost to the ground." ... "Surely that imagery isn't something that is your own, now is it, Dokuro Chrome?"
~~~~~~~~<3

he said politely, with only the slightest trace of uncertainty,
exaaaaaaaaactly how she would react~~~<3

suddenly brave enough to start barking out orders to him? Now that was interesting;
Hibari smiling omg ajksdjfsjkdfs <- totally incoherent by this point

"You can tell him yourself," she said seriously, determinedly (but somehow no less politely),
DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sure rune loved this part of your fic XD

The only interest I have in you is an interest in the way you will die."
Wow your version of hibari certainly has no room for gentlness o.o

(in Chrome's opinion) rather attractive vice-commander ROFL chrome thinks Kusakabe is ATTRACTIVE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DIES XD

[lilykt7]

I LOVE HIBARI AND CHROME! LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!They seriously need more love from the fandom...but obviously it's a yaoi dominated one. This was a nice fic, you have a very pretty writing style. A little grammar thing though is that you might be using too many commas. We just learned in my english class today (which is probably why I even remember it) that comma's aren't actually supposed to be used to show a natural pause. It's suppose to separate complete thoughts. Don't worry to much about though because I probably wouldn't have noticed it before today.

Whew now that I've scared you off I hope you continue this fic because it's very interesting.

[kill_me_faster]

XD;; I finished it? I wouldn't have posted it if it wasn't done. Also, bahahah, commas. I'm so stupid, I swear to Christ.

I'm glad you liked what you read so far. Hopefully your like of this will continuuuuuue~

[kurafufu]

"He...stole...Mukuro-sama's skills. The Six Paths of Reincarnation - that's what Byakuran Millefiore did."

HE -WHAT-? asd;lgkhasdgl;khas dg aghhhh everyone's predictions of what happened to Mukuro is making me stress out like nothing else HAHA.

*3*

asd;'glk I have no words to express how much I adore your Mukuro, Chrome, and Hibari. *3* ads;lgkhasdgl;khas THIS IS GORGEOUS AND AMAZING. MY GOD.