Lie to Me fic: He Has Departed From This Strange World A Little Ahead Of Me (1/1) pg-13

Dec 23, 2009 12:02

Title: He Has Departed From This Strange World A Little Ahead of Me
Gillian, Cal/Gillian, Emily, Loker, Reynolds, Torres, Zoe - character death, pg-13
Words: 1,476

Disclaimer: I do not own this show or these characters. And I hope they never do this.

Author's notes:
1.A massive thank you to my beyond wonderful beta, tempertemper77 for taking time out at ( Read more... )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

Leave a comment

Comments 42

tomellie December 23 2009, 12:21:27 UTC
Ok I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face.... that was so sad but so beautifully written and so very real...

Reply

etoilefilante December 23 2009, 12:35:15 UTC
I'm sorry for making your cry! But thank you for your kind words. ♥

Reply


pottermanic December 23 2009, 14:28:38 UTC
Oh. Wow.

I have no other words for this hun. It is so gorgeously written, i actually have tears in my eyes right now. You captured Gillian's pain so perfectly.

Just wow.

Reply

etoilefilante December 23 2009, 14:33:20 UTC
Ahh, thank you, bb. I promise there is Christmas fic coming within the next 24 hours that will not make you cry (unless you cry over happy things, too).

Thanks, as always, for your lovely comments! ♥

Reply


tempertemper December 23 2009, 15:11:02 UTC
Bootiful *reaches for tissue*

Damn you!

Reply

etoilefilante December 23 2009, 17:22:50 UTC
*squishes you*

Reply


adele_stein December 23 2009, 16:43:01 UTC
I've got such a knot in my throat it hurts. I'm crying but I always cry, but seriously I'm that close to sobbing. That was so freaking beautiful! Sad but so amazingly beautiful and very very very well written. Thank you!

Reply

etoilefilante December 23 2009, 17:26:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm incredibly flattered by your high praise. I really don't know what else to say except thank you. ♥ There's Christmas fic coming soon to make up for the agony of this one! :)

Reply


devilz_haircut December 23 2009, 17:29:05 UTC
That's why I love angst - for that kind of not bounded emotionality.
So so sooo beautiful, heartbreaking and indeed believable tale <3

Reply

etoilefilante December 23 2009, 18:18:09 UTC
Aah, me too. Thank you. ♥ Lovely to hear from you, as always!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up