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Jul 11, 2003 15:41

This is a continuation of this that would be best to read first. Originalfic, heavily influenced by Chuck Palahniuk. There's another 4,000 words of this but I don't think I have enough room in one entry for that much text... Nor you the patience ( Read more... )

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princess_draco July 11 2003, 13:11:10 UTC
omg i love cindy :D :D :D

This is excellent.

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eva_c July 11 2003, 13:19:37 UTC
Thanks muchly. :D Though I rather think she's a bitch.

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Re: princess_draco July 11 2003, 13:33:29 UTC
Of course, that's why I love her! Haha. I feel bad for her silk pajama bottoms, though.

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kokopoko July 11 2003, 13:51:48 UTC
Look at this site:http://www.sarcastic-muse.com/hpsa/index2.html The HP slash awards. Scroll down to Best AU fic category. Tell me if you see a fic you wrote.

I know you didn't intend for it to be slash. But I nominated it anyway because I like it!

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Re: eva_c July 11 2003, 13:57:04 UTC
*schnoogles* Thanks! Am very honored.

Let's see if I can manage to work in something more substantially slashy by the end. :D

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Re: kokopoko July 11 2003, 14:18:52 UTC
substantially slashy! Woohoo!

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Re: eva_c July 11 2003, 15:09:49 UTC
*grins madly* How do I answer this one? I don't even think I can answer it, really. But thank you - you really made my day...

The knowledge of evaporating water was from Earth Science class - it turns out we do learn useful stuff in school! :D

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mark356 July 11 2003, 17:36:03 UTC
I don't know how I can reply to this; aleph_0 already said everything I could say but much more nicely. If you can find some excuse (I don't care how lame) to consider this fanfiction on something or other by Chuck Palahniuk, I'll give this a special spot in my next WiF post. I didn't even notice how heavily present-tense this was until halfway through. I love seeing your hero get all swooney over frozen food, and the way everyone is so dead, and all of your little aside jokes. And despite that, I feel that you are not messing with us; you're telling the story just the way it needs to be told, as plainly and as straightforward as you can. Finally, you've ended it on quite a cliffhanger! Post the next 4,000 words soon.

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Re: eva_c July 12 2003, 09:06:28 UTC
Thanks! :D It's really highly derivative of Fight Club so you can label it a sort of ode to that, I suppose. You know, angry young men (though the "angry" part is coming later), and Antoine is a sort of spinoff off Tyler Durden's character in the book. I'm really, really flattered that people actually seem to be liking it. :)

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runcible July 11 2003, 18:08:12 UTC
::Jaw drops::
Wow.
W-wow.
I would say something here, but I feel as though it has already been said, and I would just blabber.
::Bows::
"We are not worthy...."

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Re: eva_c July 12 2003, 09:08:35 UTC
*schnoogles* Thanks! Too many nice people... I think I'm going to explode...

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