"Another Man's Shoes" (4/4)

[everybetty]

Comments

[coolbreeze1]

Great story! I really enjoyed this. All those little snippets of memories put John into such a wide range of situations and emotions. He'd be rightfully horrified that he had no control over them and that people would witness him struggling with them, but I loved how his team and Carson were there for him without being there too much and stifling him.

I love Carson! I'm so glad you worked him into this story. You had some really nice moments of the two of them bonding again, and of Carson letting go of who he is or is not to everyone else on Atlantis. Well done! Another fic finished! :)

[everybetty]

Thanks, S, for all the great feedback. You always pick out the stuff I like too :) Yay, another one down. Another year before I post again ;P

[kriadydragon]

Very interesting. Poor John, having to go through emotions that weren't his and having it witnessed. It was interesting to see his various reactions, even if the emotions weren't his. Fascinating way to put John through the wringer. Well done :D

[everybetty]

Thanks, M. I really appreciate hearing that you liked it.

[jlnyr]

Absolutely loved this story. At least I think it was worth the wait :-)

[everybetty]

Yay! You did like the rest :) Thanks for letting me know!

[roo1965]

I think you dealt very well with John's ricocheting emotions and fallout. Nice team interaction and thank you for Carson! worth waiting for and write more!

[everybetty]

I do love Carson, so. And I like the word you chose: ricocheting. He really did get put through an emotional pinball machine :) Thanks for the kind words :)

[tinypenny]

Lovely story! I loved John going through all the emotions...especially when he was pregnant:) Well done!

[everybetty]

Hee. I did love pregnant!John. If he was going to have the full gamut of experiences, I thought that one would be particularly jarring, touching and weird :) Thank you!