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[evoletah]

i have a question. to the general reading populus.
if you read what i write on here, does it ever make sense?
is it enjoyable to read, or do you only read because you feel you want to understand?
someone critique my writing. i want outside eyes to opinionate my inside ear.

thank you.
and jesus was wrong.

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[anditgoeslike]

I read because I want to know what's going on in your head, but I will say a lot of the time, it makes no effing sense.

And Jesus was right.

[evoletah]

jesus was wrong, a whore, a pot head and a glutton. he threw rocks at farm animals and peed in his nieghbors water wells. he people just like his sandals.
but is it enjoyable?

[anditgoeslike]

Indeed. Not about Jesus, though.

[exexjamie]

i'm making you that shirt for when you get home
there's something to look forward to