dream of the ants

Apr 18, 2005 05:53

Imagine dark nights, wandering down lost midwestern back roads, looking at the stars to guide your way. Rows of corn and scarecrows, orchards lined with apple trees. Imagine baren interstate highways full of overturned cars, some ablaze, with little sprinkles of glass spread across the road. Factories blazing. Lush forests growing around huge ( Read more... )

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sssaaassshhhaaa April 18 2005, 14:26:35 UTC
Do I even have to say it?

This reminds me, I need to get my Fight Club DVD back..

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ex_booktard559 April 18 2005, 20:27:32 UTC
I need to get my Fight Club book back. I exchanged w/ a friend for White Oleander.

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wow jaggedpixie April 18 2005, 19:20:02 UTC
"I can see the sky melting like an oil-based painting across the canvas. Outside, the colors coagulate and drip into the sea below."

That's the best part. I'm sure you can guess why...

(sigh) I can just feel the colors.

another"A haze of aurora borealis that lights up the city."
oooh.

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Re: wow ex_booktard559 April 18 2005, 20:29:44 UTC
(smiles) I was told once that when someone read my writing that they fell into a trance until they were done. It was like visiting another world for a little while. I liked that. I haven't been able to write well since I've slowed down/stopped writing a while back, but I want to continue writing sometime when all of the other stuff is cleared out of the way and I feel that I have a free enough mind to devote to it.

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fitzcarraldo April 19 2005, 00:13:43 UTC
I thought this was Concrete Jungle, but I think I like this one more. Although I'm not sure. Concrete Jungle was, and always will be, one of my most favorite pieces of writing, ever. So thank you, I guess.

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