Comments | exlibris_tenisu: Merlin: A Chuisle (3)

exlibris_tenisu

Merlin: A Chuisle (3)

Jan 03, 2009 18:01

Whew, I'm having a really hard time breaking this up into chapters! Only two more to go~

For my records, this chapter is 5,824 words.

( Then, one day, a voice hissed through the slot in the door, 'Merlin!' )

a chuisle, merlin

Comments 22

sweetp000433 October 22 2010, 23:09:21 UTC

Merlin should cut off Arthur's balls, I want Merlin raging mad at that dipshit.

ad_exia October 23 2010, 23:33:59 UTC

I was definitely mad at him, and I was writing him! :x

wylskye August 20 2011, 15:34:02 UTC

Arthur is the biggest douche ever. So the bond is reciprocal and that changes everything?!? So Arthur can now justify Merlin's action because Merlin suffers in the same way that Arthur suffers. What about the fact that Merlin SAVED Arthur over and over and over again??? What about the fact that they were friends?? What about the fact that you shouldn't even consider locking someone up in the dungeon for the rest of their life, because it's plain inhumane and plain cruel?!?

God, I know they are fictional characters, but I just really want to smack Arthur and tell him that Camelot has lost their oh-so-honourable king the day he betrayed his most faithful servant and friend for nothing more than pride.

...Regardless, I'm gonna have to read the rest of it, to ensure that Merlin does get a happy ending... And if Arthur gets to be part of it, well, he should take the stick out of his arse and try thinking a little more about his choices

Great work!

fatal_scribbles December 17 2012, 20:14:55 UTC

I don't understand why Merlin is considering forgiving Arthur at this juncture. Or why the fact that Merlin feels Arthur makes Arthur repentant. It would make sense if he knew how much Merlin has done to save him, so many times, but your Arthur remains unaware and ungrateful and so far, undeserving of forgiveness. I am confused.