Merlin: A Chuisle (5, End)

Jan 05, 2009 20:57

And the final chapter! Shorter than the rest; 3,714 words, back to PG-13~

There is also a “glossary” (if my butchering of the language can be called such) of the Gaelic I used at the end. But it might be better if you just ignore it, and assume the phrases all make sense like I do on the show. XD;

They walked through the gates of Camelot two days later and were greeted at swordpoint in the falling dusk. )

a chuisle, merlin

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inmemorybound January 6 2009, 02:15:49 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this fic. I love how honestly tender the sentiments were in this part. It was also wonderful to see Arthur standing up to Uther with such conviction, Merlin still being bold enough to interject despite all he's been through, and Uther taking heed. I'm so glad that we got a prevailing sense of hope in the end. ♥

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ad_exia January 6 2009, 02:57:44 UTC
Thank you so much~ <3 I totally fail at writing sad endings, so I knew I wanted it to end on a good note, but it sure took a while to figure out how to do it! Thankfully Uther seemed willing to listen in the end~

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rainchild January 6 2009, 02:27:58 UTC
Awww, happy ending! *melts*

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ad_exia January 6 2009, 02:58:14 UTC
<3 I couldn't not give poor Merlin a happy ending after all that~

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nyaza January 6 2009, 03:36:23 UTC
i totally didn't want to read this. the end name was a bad reminder that it would... well... end. Anyway. So much love fir this, and by this I mean the entire story. I love how it devoloped, how it arranged itself, how everything simply worked out but it was not easy, not fast and how it just ended with this sweet feeling of ¿glory? LOL. Gorgeous. ♥

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ad_exia January 6 2009, 03:53:57 UTC
Aww, well, I'm glad you read it anyway! I tried to make it end happily for everyone~ <3 Thank you so much!

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dark_subaru January 6 2009, 10:46:03 UTC
ç_ç The end and I cry. Lovely. It was so lovely, like a dream came true.
Arthur standing up to Uther and Merlin final confession. An happy ending full of love and hopes for the future.

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ad_exia January 6 2009, 16:01:36 UTC
<3 I had to make things turn out all right in the end, I'm too much of a sap. XD

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kathkin January 6 2009, 12:58:23 UTC
That was such a lovely ending. : ) I'm not sure if I've commented on this before, so I shall just say that I loved the whole thing. : D

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ad_exia January 6 2009, 16:01:02 UTC
Aw, thank you! <3 I'm really glad you enjoyed it~ :D

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