Comments | exlibris_tenisu: Ben 10 | The Color Green (Ch 6)

exlibris_tenisu

Ben 10 | The Color Green (Ch 6)

Mar 28, 2009 23:43

Okay, this is the part where I hope that everyone else knows as little about Kevin's magical powers-change as I do, and then where I pray that my idea for resolving the plot doesn't sound as utterly stupid as I think it might. Uh. :D ( Read more... )

ben 10, the color green

Comments 14

pan2dapan March 29 2009, 04:12:47 UTC

I FREAKING LOVE THIS AND YOU.

ad_exia March 29 2009, 04:18:56 UTC

XD WELL WE LOVE YOU RIGHT BACK FOR LOVING IT!

pan2dapan March 29 2009, 04:44:16 UTC

WHOO WHOO LOVE.

tonks17 March 29 2009, 06:25:44 UTC

Oh wow. This is like, WOW. I'm losing coherency here it's so wow.

Kevin's so determined to save Ben. I'm getting all scrunchy inside hoping they'll both make it! D:

Love!

ad_exia March 29 2009, 17:29:55 UTC

XD <3

Kevin is clearly not going to stop for anything. I think he's got a bit of an inferiority complex, but then again, I think all heroes do. >>;

saiika_von_maou March 29 2009, 07:00:55 UTC

*sighs happily* Oh, my day is complete.

The night after I read the last chapter, I was up all night thinking about what Kevin's plan might be. So I read the last chapter again. And he was thinking about his old powers of absorbing energy. And I thought, "He isn't...is he?"

He is. You are so amazing for alluding to it, so subtley like that. I haven't seen a foreshadowing like that in a long time. I don't think I'll be able to determine what's going to come out of this plan, though. There are a million possibilities...and you are just...so AWESOME. Update soon! I'm excited!!...and a little nervous...but still excited!!

ad_exia March 29 2009, 17:38:57 UTC

<3

Kevin just needs to feel in charge, and that was a time when he remembered feeling like that, and suddenly it just followed naturally that maybe he could make his powers do what he wanted them to in order to fix things~ It's totally a horrible plan, but hopefully nothing *too* bad will happen. XD (I'm actually still working out myself how well or not well it should go... ahaha~)

saiika_von_maou March 29 2009, 20:40:21 UTC

Well, it all depends on what happens after, doesn't it? I hope you work it out soon; I don't wanna wait too long. ^^;

ad_exia March 29 2009, 21:10:10 UTC

This is true~ Ideally all will be well and life can return to relative normal. XD I'll do my best, sometimes I just need to start writing and stuff happens!

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ad_exia March 30 2009, 02:32:39 UTC

:DD Thank you~! I'm so glad to hear it!

goldensnowfire January 26 2010, 11:25:18 UTC

I love you like no other Bevin writer before you! This is amazing!

ad_exia January 26 2010, 17:53:53 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D