Comments | exposedwarmth: why i went into social work [or why i *really* want this one job]

exposedwarmth

why i went into social work [or why i really want this one job]

Mar 08, 2004 03:42

When I was nineteen, I was restless. I was unemployed, and taking classes at a local city college that made me rethink my goals of higher education. Since I was in dire need of a job, my sister was able to pull some strings at John Muir Elementary, a neighborhood school she taught at, and got me a position as a college aide for fifth graders ( Read more... )

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some suggestions... twistedsister03 March 9 2004, 18:14:23 UTC

is this part of your application? sounds good. reconsider the first paragraphy about the pulling strings part. they don't need to know how you were able to get the job. then go into more detail at the end, as to how your past experiences make you qualified for the position. check out all the qualifications they listed, and work those sentences into the last paragraph with actual experience on your part.

hope you don't mind my comments! xxoo

Re: some suggestions... exposedwarmth March 11 2004, 20:48:51 UTC

yeah, it was. i wasn't able to rewrite it, i wrote it the night before i turned it in, at like, 3AM. i haven't heard back. that sucks, i really wanted this job. oh well.