liquescence

May 12, 2012 16:09

the lightning drops
fierce, possessive
a maiden with
her heart twisted
like brambles

the earth trembles
booms, breaks
and the ground is
molten as the look
in her liquescent eyes

the song crests
and bodies quake, sundered
sundering, reforming
into diaphanous longing
destroying the sky.

poetry, free write, inspiration

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wytchcroft May 12 2012, 06:21:31 UTC
love like gods!
x x

you are sonic boom fast for true oh inspired, lightning one!
fierce - as you say it yourself - needing a whole nature to play with
old magic - to conjure forth, to bring into existence... existence.

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eyealtering May 12 2012, 06:31:13 UTC
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IvBoR2XNr8U

Perfectly put! xx

Thank you for reading.

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wytchcroft May 12 2012, 06:33:57 UTC
i am very grateful to have had the gift of the reading.
and now i shall go watch also.

x x

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eyealtering May 12 2012, 06:36:27 UTC
I do like the lyric and have been a fan of Snow Patrol for a while ...

I was trying to find an appropriate musical piece and as yet have not come across *just* the perfect piece ...

xx

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eyealtering May 12 2012, 06:38:10 UTC
Muah!!!

Lightning was such a good prompt ... even though Wytchie didn't realise he was inspiring me ...

Thank you, Regina love! XX

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eyealtering May 12 2012, 06:40:59 UTC
p.s. I like the new icon. Is that tulle with pink ribbon? :)

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