May 12, 2012 16:09
the lightning drops
fierce, possessive
a maiden with
her heart twisted
like brambles
the earth trembles
booms, breaks
and the ground is
molten as the look
in her liquescent eyes
the song crests
and bodies quake, sundered
sundering, reforming
into diaphanous longing
destroying the sky.
poetry,
free write,
inspiration
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you are sonic boom fast for true oh inspired, lightning one!
fierce - as you say it yourself - needing a whole nature to play with
old magic - to conjure forth, to bring into existence... existence.
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Perfectly put! xx
Thank you for reading.
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and now i shall go watch also.
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I was trying to find an appropriate musical piece and as yet have not come across *just* the perfect piece ...
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Lightning was such a good prompt ... even though Wytchie didn't realise he was inspiring me ...
Thank you, Regina love! XX
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