unafraid

Jun 01, 2012 23:10

i am a tall vase
filled with delicious gardenias

{i balance the room in my
white dresses and satin skin,
calling you to draw near,

draw near,
do not be afraid.}

poetry

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wytchcroft June 1 2012, 16:07:17 UTC
wow - three for one, what a gift!
i like the linking theme of balance very much (was that deliberate?) and the economic beauty of the writing is very striking :))

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eyealtering June 9 2012, 13:04:44 UTC
Not deliberate -- I sat down and let myself write poetry. I may have been thinking on something and it filtered through all three -- great possibility that happened.

Economic beauty? Yup, I like sparse. ;) Thank you! xx

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wytchcroft June 10 2012, 01:49:51 UTC
the pleasure is all mine :)
x x

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eyealtering June 9 2012, 13:05:21 UTC
Thank you for feeling that way about my writing. I aim for that.

<3

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eyealtering June 12 2012, 06:02:02 UTC
That is a very lovely compliment. Thank you, my friend. :)

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