and these are snapshots so real they make my eyes plead

[eyealtering]

too many words and

Comments

[bennybunny]

Nice ending. Pomegranates are always an imagery winner. It has what looks like a beat to it. In your mind a song as much as a poem? x

[eyealtering]

It isn't one poem but smaller snapshots but I did like the ending of the final poem as well. So, thank you.

In my mind I didn't see it as a song -- simply a poem. That you felt it had a beat is good feedback. Thanks, again. x

[eyealtering]

Thank you, honey. You always feel the things that I am trying to express. Your support is invaluable. Thank you for also making this one a favorite. xoxo

[eyealtering]

When I write, it helps me focus. I let go of what needs to be let go of and I keep the best parts.

That you felt the sadness and even loneliness in these poems is great -- because you connected. Yet, please know I am alright and my writing is a poetic expedition into my past, present and future.

Thank you for caring. ::hugs::

[eyealtering]

Thank you, beautiful.

[heartonbroadway]

these made me ache, as i feel you must be aching. x

[eyealtering]

I feel things deeply so I suppose when I express those feelings it may seem that they are current and immediate. I tend to move around through my past, present and even future when I write. It allows me a sense of creativity, control and even understanding.

Thank you for feeling my words. xx