i

[eyealtering]

red bands

Comments

[theheartdrinker]

I really enjoyed the beat and movement in this, the stanzas become more visual as they go along and what an ending. So lyrical and lush.

[eyealtering]

I'm happy to hear you found a certain movement and motion to this piece. I enjoy free writes (as this one is). It is good not to edit and re-edit one's words.

Thank you. :)

[eyealtering]

I am partial to depth and so your compliment means more to me than I can say. Thank you. xx

[wytchcroft]

coming back to this for a re-read and i love the use of red ribbon to bind - both for what it 'means' (imho) and for the unusual and striking choice of words. something of a strength in your pieces! x

edit; sorry for the edit. i'm really quite blind these daze.

[eyealtering]

Thank you for the re-read and for the compliment to my word choice. x