Drabble Post #5

[eyesofshinigami]

I come bearing drabbles, and a special treat!

These are pretty 39/93 centric, but it's something, right? I'm really proud of the second one, just so you know.

Title: Tangled Up In You
Pairing: 93
Prompt: “93 with the prompt ‘flexible’”
For soliandxpyne
A/N: The first smut drabble so far. Enjoy. XD

Comments

[empyrealfantasy]

First comment!

I loved Flexible (and I'm so glad you made it not a dream!), and you've heard me gush over Keep Breathing. I really loved that, the ending especially. <3 <3 <3

Greatness begets results, and I couldn't not make something after reading that. xoxox

I'm tired... *snooze*

[eyesofshinigami]

You always have the first comment. Seriously. XD

I know, I know. I'm kind of glad that I changed my mind about the dream thing too. ^__^ I still like Keep Breathing better, though. I'm quite proud of that piece. I may post it over on ff, I may not.

^///////^ You flatter me way too much. Seriously.

*snuggles*

[meilice]

i liked them very much. i just wish you would have continued the first one >_<

[eyesofshinigami]

I know, I know. XD I should have continued it, but I haven't been much for writing anything in the smut department as of late.

Glad to see that you liked them anyway! ^___^ That makes me happy.

[meilice]

well you can still continue it when you feel like it. and i bet im not the only one who wishes for that ^^

[eyesofshinigami]

^/////^ You never fail to bring a smile to my face with your lovely comments, you know that? *huggles you tightly*

Well, I originally thought about doing something with the Kama Sutra, given that the prompt was "flexible" but it never seemed to pan out the way I wanted to. Plus, I read a comment where Xpyne said that she and Soli (or was it the other way around? XD) had a thing for Sanzo self-love. So, there it is. XDD

empyrealfantasy insists that I should sequel it. o_O

But yes, I agree. The second one I am really, really proud of. I was hoping to catch that feeling of loneliness and second-guessing himself, because that's how I think Goku would be. And everyone needs to be reminded now and then to keep going, to keep breathing. I guess it was also sort of a hopeful message for myself, you know? ^___^

Anyway, thank you soooo much! I'm glad that you enjoyed them! It makes me squeeful.

[eyesofshinigami]

That's sort of what I thought. Besides, I couldn't really find a situation that would be plausible enough to use it. Though, the initial idea was to have Gojyo give Goku a copy of the Kama Sutra for grins and giggles, but the monkey ended up really getting into the idea.

Very insightful of you to say. I believe that's true, and that's why sometimes it's easy to step back when you've written something and say, "Holy wow..." A lot of times things that I'm dealing with or thinking about tend to come out in my stories, so...yeah.

[eyesofshinigami]

Yes, yes. XD I was happy with it too, and I thought that was a perfect place to end it since I couldn't get the smut to work the way I wanted it to. >_<

Hee! Glad you enjoyed that one too.

<3 <3 <3

[eyesofshinigami]

FWEE! You don't know how happy it made me to know that you enjoyed it. I'm sorry that I couldn't flesh it out and make it longer, but I was really proud of the way it came out.

That's how I think Goku would be, honestly. While he trusts their relationship, it would be normal to think about him and miss him. I've felt like Goku a time or two before, so I know just where he's coming from.

^____^ Yeah, I could see him saying it too. While Gojyo would rant and rave about how Sanzo is a prick and Goku should just stop worrying about him, Hakkai would be sensible enough to realize that Goku can't not miss Sanzo.

You're quite welcome, love. I was just pleased that you enjoyed it as much as you did! *flails with you* It gives me warm fuzzies to know that you enjoyed it. *dances around happily*

[kambeiadaro]

*flails, spazzes, jumps around on a 93 high*

That first fic owns me! Sanzo's decision and then what he's thinking - all very freaking sexy! And the way Goku responds and takes charge is all yummy. And that line about his flexibility! Swoon already Sanzo!! XD

“You didn’t think I would smell ya, did ya?” <- <3 Exactly what sis and I kept telling ourselves over that certain something you know bugs us. His nose, how could he smell blood from far away yet not other bodily fluids?

I think the second one fits within Vol. 8, perfectly! I haven't gotten a chance to try and translate (because it will take ages) but there's a few spots where Goku's looking off and I see "Sanzo" mentioned in his thought bubbles. <3 Your drabble's so touching and filled with emotion. I feel for Goku. I can understand him completely, especially when you mentioned the "ache". The talk with Hakkai was excellent as well. :)

[eyesofshinigami]

I'm so glad that you enjoyed them! *squees and spazzes with you*

I had so much fun writing that. I enjoy the idea of Sanzo letting go and letting down his guard like that. I really like the idea of Goku being comfortable enough to take charge is just so damn hot.

Totally! I'm in utter agreement with you.

I really, really enjoyed writing this second drabble. I was going for just what you felt when you were reading it, so I know that I did my job all right. ^___^ Hakkai is helpful like that, when he wants to be.

Thanks for reading, love. <3 <3 <3