Comments | eyesxofxcrimson: 1000 Themes - #394 - Hetalia/Homestuck

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1000 Themes - #394 - Hetalia/Homestuck - Russia x Dave

Sep 24, 2011 02:26

Title: Illness
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: AU, language, mute!Dave, human!Russia
Words: 592
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia/Homestuck crossover
Pairings/Characters: Russia x Dave

( Too fast for Ivan to have noticed, Dave had another message prepared: )

c: russia (ivan braginsky), w: 501-600, *challenge: 1000 themes, s: axis powers hetalia, c: dave strider, s: homestuck, rating: pg-13

Comments 1

abacusaddict20 March 9 2012, 00:20:03 UTC

When you write Russia he always leaves a bad taste in my mouth, but I think that's because he is supposed to. I think you actually managed to portray both characters in a really accurate way during this piece of writing. I feel terrible for Dave, being stuck in that room with Ivan, who is so so creepy. I thought it was clever that he likes the color red so much, 'cause, y'know, communism.

The way that the patient/psychologist sexual assault is written is really cool. Dave is doing a great job at standing up for himself and stuff but he seems so so uncomfortable behind it all, which yeah he probably is. But seriously, oh my god, this fic.

I also totally forgot you did this, seriously, like I forgot that you did this whole lets ship all the homestuck/hetalia 'cause it's hilarious thing. I gotta be honest I'm actually really glad you did. This fic is amazing.