That's brilliant, Mo :) I read it before bed last night, and then again just there. You paint such a picture of your characters, even the minor ones. It's like you don't have any dialogue or action that means nothing...everything is significant, no matter how small.
thanks! I'm so glad you like it, and I'm glad you enjoy the characters as I feel characterisation is one of my strongpoints. I'm rather proud of this piece, too, for that reason and others.
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Nice.
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thanks again! woop.
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