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mekare_enra November 26 2005, 12:34:15 UTC
That's brilliant, Mo :) I read it before bed last night, and then again just there. You paint such a picture of your characters, even the minor ones. It's like you don't have any dialogue or action that means nothing...everything is significant, no matter how small.

Nice.

xx

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eyetastelikesex November 26 2005, 16:26:29 UTC
thanks! I'm so glad you like it, and I'm glad you enjoy the characters as I feel characterisation is one of my strongpoints. I'm rather proud of this piece, too, for that reason and others.

thanks again! woop.

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