neither say it, but hankyung thinks that if heechul were a place, he would be the edge of the world. it's like that feeling of knowing that you could fall if you took a step too far, a step too close, but not minding because you know it would be the most beautiful experience. hankyung thinks being around heechul is kind of like that.
neither say it, but heechul thinks that if hankyung were a place, he would be the edge of the world, simply because he thinks hankyung is kind of like love.
Want to quote the whole thing, but I'm refraining: neither say it, but hankyung thinks that if heechul were a place, he would be the edge of the world. it's like that feeling of knowing that you could fall if you took a step too far, a step too close, but not minding because you know it would be the most beautiful experience. hankyung thinks being around heechul is kind of like that.
neither say it, but heechul thinks that if hankyung were a place, he would be the edge of the world, simply because he thinks hankyung is kind of like love.
God, this is absolutely gorgeous. I really, really adore the flow and the rhythm of this fic, how it's almost like poetry but is, even better, still prose. I love your imagery and the way you string your sentences together and now I sound like a douchey English major (I was never an English major ;__;) trying to overanalyze your writing.
Basically, if I had a heartstamp, it would be all over this fic. ♥♥♥
and hankyung had knew, knew, knew, that home was only an arm’s length away.
i was so surprised to see your name in my inbox, fml. gah, just thank you, really, really, even though i disagree with half of this comment. [...did you want to be an english major? ):]
darling is too nice ;-; ♥♥
and lol, everyone seems to be quoting my tense fail.
For all that I claim to be a grammar-bitch, I overlook little things when I'm looking at the piece as a whole - at the style and the impact and the story. And I loved this. ♥ Besides, I was reading your fic as audience, not as your beta reader - if you'd asked for concrit, I'd give it! Otherwise, my approach to fic is just to tell the author what I personally enjoyed/got out of it/etc. :D
(Ahahah what would I do with an English degree? Sigh, practicality.)
crying forever. and i kind of feel stupid but all i think when i see "♥" and ":D" in the same area is, 'that's kind of cute :\' so fml. but i see what you mean by the beta vs. audience approach, so thank you for being such a nice audience goer. /bricked.
(show it off, lol. if not english, what are you going to/did/currently majoring in?)
I have three words for you: YOU ARE AWESOME~!!!!!!! You killed me with your smooth words. Reading this fic is like eating a sweet candy XDXDXD I wanna quote all the lines *crying* Love yah girl *give you my famous bouquet of chocolate-covered strawbarry flowers*
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neither say it, but hankyung thinks that if heechul were a place, he would be the edge of the world. it's like that feeling of knowing that you could fall if you took a step too far, a step too close, but not minding because you know it would be the most beautiful experience. hankyung thinks being around heechul is kind of like that.
neither say it, but heechul thinks that if hankyung were a place, he would be the edge of the world, simply because he thinks hankyung is kind of like love.
that end killed me in sugar. ♥
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and i know it sounds bad but i wouldn't mind dying because of hanchul /bricked. thanks again for reading~
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Want to quote the whole thing, but I'm refraining:
neither say it, but hankyung thinks that if heechul were a place, he would be the edge of the world. it's like that feeling of knowing that you could fall if you took a step too far, a step too close, but not minding because you know it would be the most beautiful experience. hankyung thinks being around heechul is kind of like that.
neither say it, but heechul thinks that if hankyung were a place, he would be the edge of the world, simply because he thinks hankyung is kind of like love.
♥♥♥ Mindblowingly beautiful...
Love that surpasses time :)
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you are such a sweetheart, thank you for taking the time to comment even though i'm not worthy ;o ♥
& hanchul are forever, hon. at least for me.
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it was amazing.
love love love <3
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;-; thank you for thinking so. love love love (you) ♥
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Basically, if I had a heartstamp, it would be all over this fic. ♥♥♥
and hankyung had knew, knew, knew, that home was only an arm’s length away.
Ugh, so beautiful.
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darling is too nice ;-; ♥♥
and lol, everyone seems to be quoting my tense fail.
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(Ahahah what would I do with an English degree? Sigh, practicality.)
Anywayyy, you should definitely keep writing! :D
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(show it off, lol. if not english, what are you going to/did/currently majoring in?)
♥
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You killed me with your smooth words. Reading this fic is like eating a sweet candy XDXDXD
I wanna quote all the lines *crying*
Love yah girl *give you my famous bouquet of chocolate-covered strawbarry flowers*
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