Comments | fabriclies: fall from grace; kyuhyun/heechul.

fabriclies

fall from grace; kyuhyun/heechul.

Nov 09, 2009 23:42

( some days, heechul makes dinner though, warmed ramen cups in hand and chopsticks in the other with legs dangling over the edge of his balcony ledge. )

#fanfiction, suju: kyuhyun, wc; 2801 - 3000, suju: heechul

Comments 15

dongbangsuju20 November 10 2009, 08:49:35 UTC

spot

and OMG KYUCHUL
ILY

dongbangsuju20 November 10 2009, 09:19:01 UTC

you kill me everytime, sweet and beautiful and I love you and it and idk...

this is so perfect, so beautiful, so everything I can't say ♥

I have missed your writing, sfm, and omg, I am so happy and idk what ashdjgdg that you wrote KyuChul.

Heechul is the best fallen angel that could ever happen and I love it that he never get used to human life, never get used to be not an angel anymore, but that he loves Kyu enough to live this life and ahdjgf ... why so beautiful??

heechul has a polaroid camera and endless film. heechul has forever but kyuhyun doesn't. they slow down time in the very back of the bus with laughter and snapshots, fifteen minutes that take days to live out.

omg I love polaroid cameras and I love the bus and the slowing down of the time and <3333~~~

heechul leans over the edge and drops smiles to the wind ( ... )

fall from grace; kyuchul. hecate0o November 10 2009, 11:07:23 UTC

good story..

He chose kyu than being an angel.. So sweet.. He found him after a very long tough years.. Heechul is forever young, right..

Love ur story

katsudono November 10 2009, 19:23:52 UTC

I was going to spot last night but I just. Slept? T_T idk.

But I'll be back later to leave a proper comment. :3

katsudono November 12 2009, 08:06:12 UTC

I KNEW I SPOTTED. laknfdlkanfdlasf. I am so bad at commenting, nhi, kick me. :/

i love the idea of heechul being a fallen because that's what he is, right? he would be an angel like that and just choose to disobey Those Up There and then go, fuck this, and just live life as he wishes. he doesn't want to grow old because peter pan syndrome is... NHI, HUG ME, LET US NEVER GROW OLD WITH HEECHUL. >/
your heechul always speaks so well, and kyuchul is always lovely. :3
/one day, i will write you hyukchul. <3

ameliorate23 November 10 2009, 19:34:06 UTC

That was brilliant. So real. Which is funny, considering we're talking about an angel here~ But the emotions and thoughts and outcomes, all so real. I throughly enjoyed it.

aboutl0ve November 10 2009, 20:56:16 UTC

somehow i read the ending with tears in my eyes. i think it's because heechul gave up his wings to age with kyuhyun and that's just so sweet. ♥

so how many lovers did heechul have in those 143 years? besides hankyung&kyuhyun. c: