Poetry

[fadedandromeda]

First off, I'd like to say, Valentine's Day officially sucks. :) Now, in English, we're studying poetry, kind of, and I wrote two poems. The first one is not at all my style and I really just...don't like it. I tried to put emotion behind it but I really just couldn't come up with anything in school. I'm dried of emotions. 'Til the second poem came

Comments

[aekiioc]

Great poems, Eve. The second one, as I've told you, has given me a real interesting image in my mind. A scary yet sad one. ANYWHO. Don't say your poems are crappy 'cause they're not. Face it, you make good poems. ;) Poems don't have to rhyme to be good, you know.

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[fadedandromeda]

Nu, I was saying that I -didn't- like rhyme. It's to confusing for me, I'd rather have something in my mind then put it down on paper in a good/odd way. ;P Instead of just directly. oo;

Poetry and expressing it

[anonymous]

You have a great talent hun, to express the mind and feelings will only make it feel a little better. As much as deny it will. Keep working on it...