Take a Hike

Mar 02, 2017 04:12

Brilliant lights burst and streak through the club, illuminating the fake white fog in rainbow colors. Intense dance music vibrates the walls as it rhythmically pulses throughout the room through the speakers. A sea of people crowd together on the dance floor, occasionally bumping into one another as they dance to the music. The distinct smell of ( Read more... )

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eternal_ot March 3 2017, 15:05:51 UTC
What a jerk! Glad that the bartender saved the situation. Could happen to anyone or could be happening to someone right now. A nice take on the prompt.

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fading_light March 4 2017, 04:48:17 UTC
Yep. Sadly, the world is full of jerks just like him.

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penpusher March 4 2017, 16:23:49 UTC
As a club DJ I know this tale is as true to life as can be.

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dmousey March 5 2017, 01:48:38 UTC
I remember these days! It's always a good thing to cultivate a rapport with the bartender. Saves you from many a jerk. :) Thanks for penning! Hugs and peace~~~

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beeker121 March 5 2017, 02:05:42 UTC
This is why we can't have nice things. A man who offers to buy a woman a drink but doesn't let her choose is an ass, even before the rest of it.

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mamas_minion March 5 2017, 03:00:14 UTC
Jerks like this make me sick. I had friends who worked as bartenders and bouncers and they dealt with creeps like this.

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