Almost not even a fic post. [Fic-ish things inside, though]

Jun 18, 2011 12:41


 Obviously this journal (and my fanfic writing in general) has been subject to merciless neglect as of late, but the dusty vaults of my documents folders are actually not totally empty. I haven't had the time or inspiration to write anything new since like, summer of last year, but I'm starting to feel a bit lonely for this journal. And I've been ( Read more... )

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readishmael June 18 2011, 20:38:27 UTC
Not that I don't wish we were getting Part 4 instead (seriously, anything I can do to help you get writing again, let me know), but these were fantastic. There's a great level of nuance and insight in your characterization of Jane, and I always, always love your take on high school-era Walt and Jesse. Thanks for posting.

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readishmael June 18 2011, 20:58:50 UTC
P.S....You still owe me feedback on Part 2 when you get a chance. :)

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fakepoptart June 18 2011, 21:13:57 UTC
Thanks for the quick feedback! :) These are so old that I wasn't sure if they'd actually soured in the dungeons of my hard-drive...glad that you liked them, especially the one with Jane, because I'm never completely sure how to write her (which is why I almost never do, I guess).

I got to finish part 2 the other day, actually, and I will soon leave some extended thoughts on it, although I can tell you right now that I loved it. <3

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frogfarm June 18 2011, 22:17:24 UTC
This fandom gets so little fic, but at least with quality work like yours we don't have to settle. One of these days I might do a Buffyverse or Dexter crossover.

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fakepoptart June 20 2011, 03:57:17 UTC
Thank you!
I'd like to read those cross-overs, even if I'm ignorant of the other shows. Heh.

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vegarin June 19 2011, 01:43:08 UTC
Break my heart, why don't you. <3

I really love your high school Jesse and his perspective on Walt, as always. Lines like these: "Yeah." But that's not gonna be the part you remember, is it? were especially lovely. There's always something more to Jesse, even when he's failing in all the definable ways that grown-ups like Walt would know, and you capture him so well.

And Jesse and Jane. You're a master at characterization, really, at showing instead of telling. So lovely. <333

Don't worry about edits and what have you. Sometimes you just need to share, you know? And when they are gems like this you're sharing, that's even better. ;)

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fakepoptart June 20 2011, 06:07:20 UTC
You think I'm good at showing instead of telling? Holy crap. <3 I'm always worried about over-explaining (and I know I've done it before) so that's cool to hear that I didn't go overboard this time.~
Thanks for commenting! :D

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communicator June 19 2011, 06:17:25 UTC
I am very happy to see more of your fanfic, which is so compassionate and sweet. I do hope you can write more.

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fakepoptart June 20 2011, 03:58:25 UTC
Thank you. :) I hope I can write more, too.

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loves_music17 June 20 2011, 02:52:17 UTC
I love your writing style! I've consumed every Breaking Bad fic out there & still keep coming back to your stories as the best I've read.

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fakepoptart June 20 2011, 05:09:29 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! That's such an awesome compliment, considering the other great stories out there.<3

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