A Sequel and a Drabble

Oct 19, 2007 15:07

Washed Ashore Part 1 Part 2

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elliotsmelliot October 19 2007, 15:21:20 UTC
So sweet and sad, but also funny. I loved the turnip comment. If only this Charlie knew that maybe you would save him!

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falafel_fiction October 19 2007, 20:50:54 UTC
Thanks for reading, ell! Have you got any more fic in the works?

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elliotsmelliot October 20 2007, 04:16:30 UTC
So I was at a potluck tonight and someone made turnip and I had a little private flashback to your story. I know, probably not what you wanted me to take away from it but it was a cute comment. I'm working on a story for the good/evil challenge about Alex and Ben. What about you?

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falafel_fiction October 20 2007, 07:58:02 UTC
You know, I bet you'd write a good Ben fic!

My fanfic is petering out. I've only a few more fics left to post (the end is nigh!) There's my other Halloween fic, which is an ensemble story, there's my attempt at m/m slash and then there's my 'secret project'. Not very informative there, I know...*smirks*

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iknowitsmad October 19 2007, 17:47:23 UTC
These Charlie fics never will make me not cry. Oh, Charlie. :(

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falafel_fiction October 19 2007, 20:51:56 UTC
*sniffles* You used the weepy Aaron icon too!

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iknowitsmad October 20 2007, 17:25:45 UTC
It fit perfectly, so I had to use it. :(

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falafel_fiction October 19 2007, 20:56:03 UTC
*shudders* I don't think I can go back there. It was more than painful. Once I got to the Looking Glass/torture scenes it was just a very scary distressing headspace. I couldn't write it. It must have been tough for Dom to act it. But then again he likes dark stuff.

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falafel_fiction October 19 2007, 22:07:20 UTC
Just trying to imagine Charlie's mental state in his final moments was horrible. I really when it when people talk about Charlie's death as if it was something beautiful and moving. I just found it very cruel.

It almost feels like there is a hint of defiance in Dom's final performance. Kind of a "look how blistering I can be when you give me meaty material". Darlton knew it as well. They wasted and then threw away a great actor.

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meagan4dominic October 20 2007, 03:48:10 UTC
Aww I actually got a little teary reading that. I really loved it, you seemed to capture Charlie perfectly & I loved the relationship between he & Aaron. I loved the part about how if Aaron could talk he might say that Charlie was his dad - aww! It was just so sweet

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falafel_fiction October 20 2007, 08:00:26 UTC
Thanks meg! Aaron really responded to Charlie like he was his dad. He was very sensitive to Charlie.

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sapphire_child October 21 2007, 12:27:20 UTC
I remember reading this fic for the first time and just bawling my eyes out all over my computer. It's so beautiful and sad.

My favourite bit still remains: Aaron knows me now, but one day he’ll forget. All I want is for him to live long enough to forget...

Oh Charlie...

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falafel_fiction October 21 2007, 12:54:48 UTC
*sniffles* With hints that Aaron is a special baby I hope he doesn't ever forget Charlie. With all those dreams in F+W I think the two of them must have a spiritual bond.

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sapphire_child October 22 2007, 01:07:56 UTC
I could see Aaron actually having some form of pychic abilities. Can you see him as a little kid having dreams...well nightmares really...about Charlie dying? *shivers*

Here's to hoping we get a Claire/Aaron flash forward and get to see just what makes Aaron so special.

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