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Ow... [Aerith rubs her forehead, looking around in surprise as she picks herself up off the floor. So many people were in the ship now, it felt like her head was spinning.]

Riku? Axel? Is everyone alright? [She was just getting herself together to head out the door of her cabin when the original tenant steps through the door. A moment of awkward ( Read more... )

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[The sphere shows Aerith bundled up in her dress, looking up at her sphere as it hovers above her. It looks whole now, unlike the broken Holy materia it had resembled previously. It even has a faint pale-green glow to it. She looks around again, then up at her sphere.]

Does anyone know if I could find some scissors around here? Maybe doll clothes ( Read more... )

[She wakes up in the Library, staring at her hands. She glances up, her heart suddenly pounding and she's overcome with the sudden urge to cry. But not from fear or pain ( Read more... )

[When Aerith wakes up, it's in a field of lilies that stretch on as far as the eye can see in any direction. Her old wounds are gone, her hair's long and untangled, the tattoo from ShinRa is nowhere to be found. Her pink dress and red jacket look brand new, her braid held back by a crisp pink ribbon. She stands and stares at her hands, turning them ( Read more... )

[It had to happen sometime, no matter what. Even she couldn't live without sleep forever, just as she needed food even if she no longer noticed the hunger for what it was. But the scene that stretched out before her left her feeling something she'd almost forgotten ( Read more... )

Hurts. [Her hand is shaking, the palm blistered and scorched and she's glaring at it.]

Hurts. Won't go away. Why not. Why not. Should fix it but it won't.

[Huddled in the forest in a tattered white cloak, drawing concentric circles in the dirt.]

Light and darkness...silence and song... Dawn and twilight? Possibly.

So many gone, fallen away. Did they make it home?