This is the first chapter in my next book, "50 Lovers". I think this is the style I'm going with, with all names changed to protect those I'm talking about, including myself.
Okay, the format didn't copy very well...each line that only goes about halfway across the page is the last line of a paragraph...hope that doesn't throw you all off.
Thanks! I'm hoping this book does better than the other (oh, in case I hadn't told you...if I ever become famous and die, you hold a truly one of a kind...Starlight Hill will not be published, at least, not any time soon, so what you own is now a rarity).
Not sure when another chapter will be up and running...I've retold a few more events, but they don't have the same nostalgic feel to me, and I'm disliking how they're turning out...I still want to write it, but I can't get the feel back as I did for this chapter, we'll just have to see if it comes back to me.
I love your new book idea and I can't wait to read more, it's really interesting. This chapter really took me out of my shoes and put me into the character's. It's very brave of you I think to write about your personal life and show it t every one, even though names are changed.
I'm not sure how the rest of the stories are going to turn out...as of right now, I can't get the feeling back that I had when writing the first chapter. I was in a semi-nostlagic mood at first, but now, it just feels like I'm just blabbering on about past events (not really reliving the story, as it was with this chapter). I'm sure if the feeling returns, I'll write a few more good chapters, and put them up, but I can't tell when that feeling will return.
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