Everytime you mentioned hearing his blood moving about and whatnot, I keep getting a jittery feeling. That always happens when we talk about blood and that sort of thing in Health or Biology or something. :P
I liked this. It's interesting. Hopefully you'll expand on this.
I actually have whole scenes in mind, but for some reason, the oddest thing happened...when I wrote the 'But what if I can't control it?' line, my brain completely went to sleep. The story disappeared, the thread disappeared, and I couldn't even remember the character's names (I had to flip up and re-read my own story, because it all just disappeared). That's why I stopped when I did. I've got some of the scenes back, so I'll add more to it later.
I know what you mean about getting jittery, I used to freak out thinking I could hear my own blood pumping (part of the inspiration for this story, actually).
You are so creative I don't know how you can think of such interesting things. I definitely want to read more of this, it caught my attention right away and the story always kept me at the edge of me seat. You really were born to be a science fiction writer...if that's the right type sometimes it has different names. Great story :)
I actually am leaning more toward the sci-fi field (I was hoping to go with horror, but I think my sci-fi is a bit better). And thank you, as always. I had forgotten about this story for a while, until you commented on it. Life has been a little hectic for me. By the way, you should check out my MySpace for more of my stories. It's myspace.com/misguidedemotions (sorry, the link thing isn't working for me right now). I've been putting a few more up over there, simply because I check that more often.
So how are you doing, by the way?? I hadn't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well with you.
I don't have a myspace thing sorry!I dislike falling into fads...but I can read them and just comment to you on live journal. Eh I'm doing good, things were a bit dark but now they're a lot better. School is done for the summer so I'll be around more often. =]
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I liked this. It's interesting. Hopefully you'll expand on this.
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I know what you mean about getting jittery, I used to freak out thinking I could hear my own blood pumping (part of the inspiration for this story, actually).
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So how are you doing, by the way?? I hadn't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well with you.
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Eh I'm doing good, things were a bit dark but now they're a lot better. School is done for the summer so I'll be around more often. =]
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