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oxoniensis October 21 2007, 22:19:47 UTC
Lovely!

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falling_words October 21 2007, 22:32:43 UTC
Thank you! It was my first real go at the fandom, so I was worried. Still don't quite have the characters down, I feel, but ah well.

I'm glad you like it!

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lo0o0ony_lauren October 21 2007, 22:42:50 UTC
This was indeed quite lovely, but particularly this line:
He found himself smiling at the intensity with which Posner loved not just Dakin, but anything he found beautiful.
Pretty!

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falling_words October 21 2007, 23:06:07 UTC
Thank you!

Adore your icon, btw.

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kyasuriin October 22 2007, 01:12:10 UTC

oh this was lovely. There isn't much fic about them while they're still in highschool and the way you've done it is perfect.
"I won't tell if you don't. Besides, if we're playing by God's rules, I'm already going to Hell just for thinking it." made me smile. Characterisations are right on, imo. :)

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falling_words October 22 2007, 22:37:08 UTC
Oh I am absolute rubbish at future-fic. (See the post before this one in my LJ for proof.)

I'm glad you liked it! And that you found it in character. Whew!

Thanks for reading!

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celandineb October 22 2007, 02:29:20 UTC
Mm, I liked this. I like the way that Scripps is very much in his own head and that it takes thinking of Dakin being reckless to let him do the same.

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falling_words October 22 2007, 22:39:04 UTC
Dakin and Scripps always seemed like such an odd friendship to me. One I understand, but odd just the same. I like the idea of what influences they might have on one another.

Thank you for reading!

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isthi October 22 2007, 11:22:39 UTC
Liked it very much, especially the bit about the piano and the last sentence.

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falling_words October 22 2007, 22:38:06 UTC
Thank you!

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