just an observation

Apr 04, 2007 21:22


Wondering aimlessly onward

As streets whoosh be indifferently

Moon risen high looking the other direction

Pradas and Guccis stomp by boastingly

Prideful pockets expel unnecessary bills

Gas-guzzling monsters plow through taunting streets

Flashing lights and high rises envelope everything

Innocence dying, shrinking in shiny signs, blinking bulbs

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raijin2 April 6 2007, 12:25:01 UTC
Poetry is inherently dramatic...I thought that was the idea?

Or am I missing out on specific references within the words?

p.s. rock on

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fallingforyou69 April 6 2007, 21:06:20 UTC
lol you are a dork
and no "specific refeneces within these words"
just tired of people thinking they are the center of the universe...

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hmm center of the universe caligirltnt5 April 7 2007, 20:16:22 UTC
i'm not wanted to be yesterday but it was more so one of my friends uhhh i'm being selfish!

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greenparty666 April 8 2007, 18:07:26 UTC
I don't know how people can be selfish, although people think I am. In truth, I think I am boring. Isn't it fun to talk to other people? I forgot what I was going to say, and it's easier to keep typing than to hit the backspace bar. Have fun reading this!

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lol caligirltnt5 April 8 2007, 20:44:55 UTC
thanks yea it is amusing

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