vibrating words

[false_pretenses]

dreaming smiling

Comments

[urgent_stare]

id love to hear this spoken.

[false_pretenses]

you know, of all the things ive written this one seemed most musical to me.. i was sort of dancing while i wrote it and so i imagined it out loud... if that makes any sense.

:)

[rocks_in_riots]

for me
for giving back to it all
for going back to me
to being only me
to being solely for reaching beyond flesh
and beyond enclosure
into the heart

This is very beautiful. The ending stands out. Brava!
:) Adrianne

Re: :)

[false_pretenses]

thank you very much