Comments | famous99: OCSFC 5

famous99

OCSFC 5

Jul 06, 2009 12:26

Title: That Night
Rating: PG
Beta: None - Forgive the errors
Disclaimer: I still don't own anything relating to The OC.
Notes: Written for brandywine421

Sentence: Ryan watches as Volchek's car bursts into flame at the bottom of the hill and tries to think over Marissa's screams.

( That Night )

fanfic, oc, ocsfc

Comments 41

smc36 July 6 2009, 16:40:18 UTC

Of course Ryan would blame himself - that's such a Ryan thing to do. Perfect characterization!!
But um - hee, I kind of wondered if Marissa wasn't in the van (at first) with Volchuk...wishful thinking maybe?
Sorry.

famous99 July 6 2009, 16:41:27 UTC

I contemplated having Marissa in the van :) But decided to keep it as close to canon as possible... well without her dying.

kazfloyd July 6 2009, 17:07:49 UTC

Wow, so Ryan and Sandy. Very nicely done.

Your other sentences were very interesting too.

famous99 July 6 2009, 19:30:56 UTC

Thanks. If you'd like to try and write some of the other sentences, they are up for grabs.

chicletinho July 6 2009, 17:20:57 UTC

Heavy angst, Ryan & Sandy - perfect combination!! I love it.

famous99 July 6 2009, 19:31:08 UTC

So glad you did!

chrisear July 6 2009, 17:21:41 UTC

great story,
too bad its finished

famous99 July 6 2009, 19:31:44 UTC

too bad its finished
That's always a compliment!

xwaltzforvenus July 6 2009, 17:28:11 UTC

Ryan blaming himself... of course he would. And of course Marissa would be of zero help.

Very plausible, especially the Sandy/Ryan convo.

famous99 July 6 2009, 19:32:06 UTC

So glad you felt it worked.