Fic: Feed the Emptiness

[fanaticreader]

Title: Feed the Emptiness
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker (LotS)
Pairing: Kahlan/Dahlia, Cara/Dahlia, Kahlan/Cara, Cara/Dahlia/Kahlan
Words: 2645
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up to Eternity
Warnings: Mentions of torture, rough sex, Dubcon, threesomes, dom/sub, some angst, character death (no not of our lovely ladies lol)... Also: this is AU, where Tears/Unbroken did

Comments

[fanaticreader]

Thank you, I'm happy you got both aspects of this fic. I figured people might either focus on the sex or just focus on the pain, ignoring - or perhaps simply remain unaware - of the utter mess that this fic is.

As much as I can admit to lusting over Mord-Sith and general "sexy bad guys/girls" I can't forget that they're utterly twisted characters.

Sexy as they are in their leather, I would NOT want to meet a Mord-Sith in any capacity lol

I'm glad you could enjoy it even though it was difficult to read. I like to imagine Cara would still have some small capacity for redemption. Problem is that with the Seeker gone all hope appears lost.

[fanaticreader]

Thank you :) I'm very new to the fandom (and trying to inhale every fic in its existance) so I was worried I didnt stay true to the characters voices (sans Kahlan who is clearly not herself lol).

[mayireadtoday]

Great lines: "Gripping her hard by the neck, she turned Dahlia to face her so she could mark her territory. She was not the jealous type; she allowed others to play with her toys. But they needed to know whose toys belonged to whom."

Really hot: “Dahlia has been gentle with you Confessor. No pet of mine speaks out of turn. Never. Do you understand me?”

I love how jealous Cara is: "But Kahlan belonged to Cara. She wasn’t sure if she could forgive Dahlia for taking away her chance to break the Mother Confessor"

Awesome: "Without thinking unbidden words left her mouth as a whisper:

“She will be mine.”

And that should make everything right."

This was wonderful.

[fanaticreader]

Hehehe glad you liked. Who wouldnt love this pairing/threesome.

I really hope they do a third season (though I doubt it) because I sure as hell want to see more of Dahlia - there was some minor foreboding when Zed mentioned he had no idea how the spell would affect her.

Mmmmm I might write up a prequel for this with Dahlia/Kahlan. But I dont know... a torture fic.... lol Might be a bit much.

Jealous!Cara is awesome.

[green78]

Wow...I liked that more than I thought I would. You totally have to write a sequel where Kahlan becomes Cara's and Cara's alone. UNF. So dark, but so well done.

[fanaticreader]

Thanks :D I was actually thinking about writing a prequel between Dahlia/Kahlan. Is it weird that I am a little hesitant to write about Cara torturing Kahlan? lol I just adore Cara so much.... LotS fandom might also stalk me to my house and set it ablaze while I sleep if I do it too lmao

[cameron_sarah]

I want both! :P a a prequel between with Dahlia/Kahlan, and a sequel where Kahlan becomes Cara's! :D:D I'm greedy like that!

Also, I really liked this story, and see what Cara might have been like re-broken into the Mord-Sith. Really good! :D

[arista_artisan]

I was actually thinking about writing a prequel between Dahlia/Kahlan.
This needs to happen like NOW.

A Dahlia/Kahlan torture fic wasn't exactly my first idea for those two. I think they match up well personality wise. But I desperately want to read this prequel because their dynamic here was really curious. I read that in the Sword of Truth books during the breaking process those that survive breaking do so because they "fall in love" with their mistresses. Dahlia was really affectionate allowing Kahlan to touch her and kissing her on the forehead. It seems OOC for a mord'sith but not so much Dahlia. Moreover, I couldn't discern if Dahlia's affection was calculatedly designed for Cara, indulgently Machiavellian or perhaps something more? MY INTEREST, IT'S PIQUED.

[musicffyou]

wow this is different and very very awesome. I've never read a story where the Seeker didn't win and I would love it if you continued it or at least showed us what Kahlan would be like after Cara made her hers.

[fanaticreader]

Thank you :) I'll think about writing a sequel.... I guess if people really want one I can write one up. Im just worried about dancing the fine line between completely squicking everyone (and ruining Cara's dreamy image) and toning down the Mord-Sith too much lol

I'll see if I can make a sequel work...

[fanaticreader]

I am inhaling your fics (currently) so Im delighted that you liked this one :D

I have a capacity for darkness.... but I still wouldnt want to meet a Mord-Sith. With them, there is no safety word, no real consent and it's all very ugly (at least from what the show implies).

I'll really have to mull over a possible sequel. I have some ideas but I want to make sure it doesnt turn into an all out gore fest for the purpose of disgusting everyone lol Even my PWP has to have a minor point to make.

Thanks again for the comment :)