but my body was loose and i was set alight

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Title: but my body was loose and i was set alight
Fandom/Characters: Doctor Who, River/Eleven
Rating:  M  
Wordcount: 5,995
Summary: “Is she going to be your wife one day?” Amy was asking archly and River could hear the Doctor’s sigh.
“Yes.” River’s face dropped in shock and she scrambled to peek around the doorframe to watch them. He was leaning with

Comments

[betawho]

Awww! Sweet, and heartfelt. I liked how he asked her to use his name. It was so achey. It must really mean something to him that someone still knows his name.

Nicely hot and lush and sexy. And I think it actually fit around the rest of the story very well.

I still love their patience with each other, their desperate attempt to try to not force each other into this life that seems to be "ordained" for them. While at the same time very scarily going on faith and hope that what they treasure of their lives will not be stolen. Even by accident.

And I like how he can't seem to stop touching her.

[xsufferxbitchx]

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I want this fic to exist under my Christmas tree this year. I love it that much.

[spoilersweetiex]

Ahhh I love this one, I love him being with her when he's so young and clueless it's cute :D

THE SHOES! YES

Gah this is so adorable but so sexy too how do you do that? I love it. You can't resist her Doctor I'm glad you just accepted it :D

[darling_ashes]

Awww, I love it! He's so drawn to her, even so early on. And she's so patient with him (as he was with her later on).

Everything fit so well. I loved it. :)

[lonewytch]

Oh, this is just beautiful. I absolutely love what you've done with the episode. It's got a real ache to it, poor poor River. But there's such a tenderness there too, and it's really romantic. It's gorgeous.

“Teach me to love you.”

*dies*