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Half Lights of Midnight

Nov 06, 2008 22:08

Title: Half Lights of Midnight - part three
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 27 133
Disclaimer: Not mine. Never were. Never will be. This is the Holy Trinity of denials. Anyone’s prior claim to the characters is recognised, I’ll return them unharmed and happier. Well would you look at that, everyone’s a winner.
Warning(s): Sex? Do people need to be ( Read more... )

m*a*s*h, fic, hawk/trapper

Comments 11

daisybblue November 7 2008, 01:10:41 UTC

That was amazing. Seriously, mind-blowingly amazing. I would start quoting my favourite lines, but it would take too damn long. It was so vivid and real and your voices were dead on. I'm just blown away.

fanfic_whore November 8 2008, 01:03:28 UTC

Glad you liked - it was your request after all! Don't worry about getting the return fic to me any time soon; if you're anything like me you need a deadline to sharpen your mind. The only reason this is finished is I knew I had uni and work deadlines coming up around about now, so finished the fic back in October before term started.

Mind you I would love to read what you've written!

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fanfic_whore November 8 2008, 01:04:41 UTC

Thanks. I love writing (I just don't often get the time) so it's nice that it comes across well. Ta for commenting.

justkimberly November 8 2008, 15:35:10 UTC

Most, Most Excellent! That was really amazing. Thanks so much for sharing! :)

fanfic_whore January 24 2009, 23:32:53 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed. It's nice to know that it's not just me that enjoys this!

brutalglitter December 19 2008, 18:12:18 UTC

Wow... Impressively done. I don't think I've ever seen this pairing done quite so well. You really capture the feel of the characters and unlike some of the fics I see for this pairing it all seemed plausible, from motive and thought process to dialogue and even the realistically unrealistic expectations the two of them have.

Very good job, thanks for writing.

fanfic_whore January 24 2009, 23:36:54 UTC

No problem at all. Glad you liked it! I did struggle with the characterisation, there were a few points when I felt like throwing in the towel but my terribly helpful beta kept straightening me out. Also it's really good to know that it comes across as realistic, it is something I aim for. I've read far too many fics where you end up shaking your head and going 'no way would he ever do that...', so I try to avoid it in my writing as much as possible. :)

aseret_kitsune January 10 2009, 07:38:49 UTC

I have to say, I greatly enjoyed this story. The dialogue is wonderful, and you have both characters down. Lovely job.

fanfic_whore January 24 2009, 23:38:04 UTC

Thanks for the feedback. I did spend a lot of time watching wall to wall MASH to ensure the voices were as near accurate as I could make them. Good to know it was worth it!